From bc819bcd9a908e49254c65119fe8f8527e1bda7f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 16 Feb 2005 19:26:01 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] In SLIP section:

- more s/kermit/Kermit
- add some missing tags, fix some others (for instance, use of keycap
  ones for a pressed key)
- Add a manual page entity for slattach(8) where needed
- s/for me// or s/me/freebsd-net mailing list/ where needed (same for "mine"
  usage)
---
 .../books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml   | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
index 302792fffe..0d3155ccb0 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
@@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ defaultroute    # put this if you want that PPP server will be your
 
       <para>To connect:</para>
 
-      <indexterm><primary>kermit</primary></indexterm>
+      <indexterm><primary>Kermit</primary></indexterm>
       <indexterm><primary>modem</primary></indexterm>
       <procedure>
 	<step>
@@ -1419,7 +1419,7 @@ ifconfig ppp0 delete
 kermit -y /etc/ppp/kermit.dial
 pppd /dev/tty01 19200</programlisting>
 
-      <indexterm><primary>kermit</primary></indexterm>
+      <indexterm><primary>Kermit</primary></indexterm>
       <para><filename>/etc/ppp/kermit.dial</filename> is a <application>Kermit</application>
       script that dials and makes all necessary authorization on the
       remote host (an example of such a script is attached to the end
@@ -2647,25 +2647,25 @@ output ***\x0d, echo \x0aCONNECTED\x0a</programlisting>
 
 	<para>to kill <command>slattach</command>.  Keep in mind you must be
 	  <username>root</username> to do the above.  Then go back to
-	  kermit (by running <command>fg</command> if you suspended it) and
+	  <command>kermit</command> (by running <command>fg</command> if you suspended it) and
 	  exit from
-	  it (<command>q</command>).</para>
+	  it (<keycap>q</keycap>).</para>
 
-	<para>The <command>slattach</command> manual page says you have 
+	<para>The &man.slattach.8; manual page says you have 
 	  to use <command>ifconfig sl0 down</command> 
           to mark the interface down, but this does not
-	  seem to make any difference for me.
+	  seem to make any difference.
 	  (<command>ifconfig sl0</command> reports the same thing.)</para>
 
-	<para>Some times, your modem might refuse to drop the carrier
-	  (mine often does).  In that case, simply start kermit and quit
+	<para>Some times, your modem might refuse to drop the carrier.
+	  In that case, simply start <command>kermit</command> and quit
 	  it again. It usually goes out on the second try.</para>
       </sect3>
 
       <sect3>
 	<title>Troubleshooting</title>
 
-	<para>If it does not work, feel free to ask me.  The things that
+	<para>If it does not work, feel free to ask on &a.net.name; mailing list.  The things that
 	  people tripped over so far:</para>
 
 	<itemizedlist>