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Fix some minor grammar and punctuation problems.

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freebsd-update: change one mention to a man entity.
freebsd-update: Set SRCCONF to null in both custom kernel sections.
doc: add link to FDP in "building doc from source" section.
doc: use <replaceable> in svn URL
Move indexterm in signal 11 FAQ to answer fix rendering.
Some changes suggested by Mehmet Erol Sanliturk
<m.e.sanliturk@gmail.com>.
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Warren Block 2013-01-29 22:37:44 +00:00
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@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
<firstname>Jim</firstname> <firstname>Jim</firstname>
<surname>Mock</surname> <surname>Mock</surname>
<contrib>Restructured, reorganized, and parts updated <contrib>Restructured, reorganized, and parts updated
by</contrib> by </contrib>
</author> </author>
<!-- Mar 2000 --> <!-- Mar 2000 -->
</authorgroup> </authorgroup>
@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
</note> </note>
<para>If a <command>crontab</command> utilizing the features <para>If a <command>crontab</command> utilizing the features
of <command>freebsd-update</command> exists, it must be of &man.freebsd-update.8; exists, it must be
disabled before the following operation is started.</para> disabled before the following operation is started.</para>
<sect2 id="freebsdupdate-config-file"> <sect2 id="freebsdupdate-config-file">
@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ MergeChanges /etc/ /var/named/etc/</programlisting>
installed from the sources:</para> installed from the sources:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>env DESTDIR=/boot/GENERIC make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null</userinput> &prompt.root; <userinput>env DESTDIR=/boot/GENERIC make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null SRCCONF=/dev/null</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>mv /boot/GENERIC/boot/kernel/* /boot/GENERIC</userinput> &prompt.root; <userinput>mv /boot/GENERIC/boot/kernel/* /boot/GENERIC</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>rm -rf /boot/GENERIC/boot</userinput></screen> &prompt.root; <userinput>rm -rf /boot/GENERIC/boot</userinput></screen>
@ -481,7 +481,7 @@ MergeChanges /etc/ /var/named/etc/</programlisting>
installed from the sources:</para> installed from the sources:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/src</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null</userinput></screen> &prompt.root; <userinput>make kernel __MAKE_CONF=/dev/null SRCCONF=/dev/null</userinput></screen>
<para>For this kernel to be identified as the <para>For this kernel to be identified as the
<literal>GENERIC</literal> kernel by <literal>GENERIC</literal> kernel by
@ -912,7 +912,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen>
western US mirror using the HTTPS protocol with this western US mirror using the HTTPS protocol with this
command:</para> command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout <literal>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/doc/head</literal> /usr/doc</userinput></screen> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>svn checkout <replaceable>https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org</replaceable>/doc/head /usr/doc</userinput></screen>
<para>Please use the closest mirror from the available <link <para>Please use the closest mirror from the available <link
linkend="svn-mirrors">Subversion mirror sites</link>.</para> linkend="svn-mirrors">Subversion mirror sites</link>.</para>
@ -1021,6 +1021,11 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done.</screen>
<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/doc</userinput> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>cd /usr/doc</userinput>
&prompt.root; <userinput>make FORMATS='html html-split' install clean</userinput></screen> &prompt.root; <userinput>make FORMATS='html html-split' install clean</userinput></screen>
<para>For information on editing and submitting corrections to
the documentation, please see the <ulink
url="&url.books.fdp-primer;">FreeBSD Documentation
Project Primer for New Contributors</ulink>.</para>
</sect2> </sect2>
<sect2 id="doc-ports"> <sect2 id="doc-ports">
@ -2924,13 +2929,13 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<qandaentry> <qandaentry>
<question> <question>
<indexterm><primary>signal 11</primary></indexterm>
<para>My compile failed with lots of signal 11 (or other <para>My compile failed with lots of signal 11 (or other
signal number) errors. What has happened?</para> signal number) errors. What has happened?</para>
</question> </question>
<answer> <answer>
<indexterm><primary>signal 11</primary></indexterm>
<para>This is normally indicative of hardware problems. <para>This is normally indicative of hardware problems.
(Re)making the world is an effective way to stress test (Re)making the world is an effective way to stress test
your hardware, and will frequently throw up memory your hardware, and will frequently throw up memory
@ -2969,7 +2974,7 @@ Script done, &hellip;</screen>
<para>However, if you know what you are doing you can have <para>However, if you know what you are doing you can have
<command>make buildworld</command> skip this step. This <command>make buildworld</command> skip this step. This
will make subsequent builds run much faster, since most will make subsequent builds run much faster, since most
of sources will not need to be recompiled. The flip of the sources will not need to be recompiled. The flip
side of this is that subtle dependency problems can side of this is that subtle dependency problems can
creep in, causing your build to fail in odd ways. This creep in, causing your build to fail in odd ways. This
frequently generates noise on the &os; mailing lists, frequently generates noise on the &os; mailing lists,