Various fixes: punctuation, typos and useless word.

PR:		docs/41531
Submitted by:	Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
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Marc Fonvieille 2002-08-11 09:20:39 +00:00
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<title>HTTP (required for webpages, optional for FTP fileset)</title> <title>HTTP (required for webpages, optional for FTP fileset)</title>
<para> <para>
If you want to offer the FreeBSD webpages, you need If you want to offer the FreeBSD webpages, you need
to install a webserver a.k.a <application>httpd</application>. to install a webserver a.k.a. <application>httpd</application>.
You may optionally offer the FTP fileset via HTTP. You may optionally offer the FTP fileset via HTTP.
The choice of Webserver software is left up to the mirror administrator. The choice of Webserver software is left up to the mirror administrator.
Some of the most popular choices are: Some of the most popular choices are:
@ -727,8 +727,8 @@ cvspserver stream tcp nowait root /usr/bin/cvs cvs -f -l -R -T /anoncvstmp --all
<para> <para>
Mirrors are organized by country. All Mirrors are organized by country. All
official mirrors have a DNS entry of the form official mirrors have a DNS entry of the form
<hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. Whith <hostid>ftpN.CC.freebsd.org</hostid>. With
<emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) beeing the <emphasis>CC</emphasis> (i.e. country code) being the
<emphasis>top level domain</emphasis> <emphasis>top level domain</emphasis>
of the country, where this mirror is located; of the country, where this mirror is located;
and <emphasis>N</emphasis> is a number, and <emphasis>N</emphasis> is a number,
@ -932,7 +932,7 @@ cvspserver stream tcp nowait root /usr/bin/cvs cvs -f -l -R -T /anoncvstmp --all
<para> <para>
Tier-1 mirrors are required to: Tier-1 mirrors are required to:
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<listitem><para>to carry the complete fileset</para></listitem> <listitem><para>carry the complete fileset</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>allow access to other mirror sites</para></listitem> <listitem><para>allow access to other mirror sites</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>provide <application>FTP</application> and <listitem><para>provide <application>FTP</application> and
<application>RSYNC</application> access</para></listitem> <application>RSYNC</application> access</para></listitem>