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The FreeBSD Documentation Project
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<chapter id="install">
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<para>The following chapter will attempt to guide you through the
install of FreeBSD on your system. It can be installed through a
variety of methods including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
variety of methods, including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
network connectivity via modem or local network), CDROM, floppy
disk, tape, an MS-DOS partition, or even NFS.</para>
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you can make floppies with the <filename>makeflp.bat</filename>
command.</para>
<para>If the CD has El Torrito boot support and your system
<para>If the CD has El Torito boot support and your system
supports booting directly from the CDROM drive (many older
systems do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis>), simply insert the first
FreeBSD of the set into the drive and reboot your system. You
will be put into the install menu directly from the CD.</para>
<para>If you are installing from an MS-DOS partition and have
the proper drivers to access your cd, run the install.bat
script provided on the CDROM. This will attempt to boot
the FreeBSD installation directly from DOS.</para>
the proper drivers to access your CD, run the
<filename>install.bat</filename> script provided on the CDROM.
This will attempt to boot the FreeBSD installation directly
from DOS.</para>
<note>
<para>You must do this from actual DOS (i.e., boot in DOS
mode) and not from a DOS window under Windows.</para>
</note>
<para>For the easiest interface of the all (from DOS), type
<para>For the easiest interface of all (from DOS), type
<command>view</command>. This will bring up a DOS menu utility
that leads you through all of the available options.</para>
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<programlisting>
ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent</programlisting>
<para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine (and
permission to log into it) can now chose a media type of FTP and
type in <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your
machine</replaceable></userinput> after picking
&ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during the
install.</para>
<para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine can now
chose a media type of FTP and type in
<userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your machine</replaceable></userinput>
after picking &ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during
the install.</para>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title>Before installing from Floppies</title>
<para>If you must install from floppy disk (which we suggest you
do not do), either due to unsupported hardware or simply because
you insist on doing things the hard way, you must first prepare
some floppies for the install.</para>
do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis> do), either due to unsupported
hardware or simply because you insist on doing things the hard
way, you must first prepare some floppies for the install.</para>
<para>At a minimum, you will need as many 1.44MB or 1.2MB floppies
as it takes to hold all the files in the

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The FreeBSD Documentation Project
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.32 2000/01/21 19:26:19 jim Exp $
$FreeBSD: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/install/chapter.sgml,v 1.33 2000/01/21 20:00:44 jim Exp $
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<chapter id="install">
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<para>The following chapter will attempt to guide you through the
install of FreeBSD on your system. It can be installed through a
variety of methods including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
variety of methods, including anonymous FTP (assuming you have
network connectivity via modem or local network), CDROM, floppy
disk, tape, an MS-DOS partition, or even NFS.</para>
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you can make floppies with the <filename>makeflp.bat</filename>
command.</para>
<para>If the CD has El Torrito boot support and your system
<para>If the CD has El Torito boot support and your system
supports booting directly from the CDROM drive (many older
systems do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis>), simply insert the first
FreeBSD of the set into the drive and reboot your system. You
will be put into the install menu directly from the CD.</para>
<para>If you are installing from an MS-DOS partition and have
the proper drivers to access your cd, run the install.bat
script provided on the CDROM. This will attempt to boot
the FreeBSD installation directly from DOS.</para>
the proper drivers to access your CD, run the
<filename>install.bat</filename> script provided on the CDROM.
This will attempt to boot the FreeBSD installation directly
from DOS.</para>
<note>
<para>You must do this from actual DOS (i.e., boot in DOS
mode) and not from a DOS window under Windows.</para>
</note>
<para>For the easiest interface of the all (from DOS), type
<para>For the easiest interface of all (from DOS), type
<command>view</command>. This will bring up a DOS menu utility
that leads you through all of the available options.</para>
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<programlisting>
ftp:*:99:99::0:0:FTP:/cdrom:/nonexistent</programlisting>
<para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine (and
permission to log into it) can now chose a media type of FTP and
type in <userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your
machine</replaceable></userinput> after picking
&ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during the
install.</para>
<para>Anyone with network connectivity to your machine can now
chose a media type of FTP and type in
<userinput>ftp://<replaceable>your machine</replaceable></userinput>
after picking &ldquo;Other&rdquo; in the FTP sites menu during
the install.</para>
</sect3>
<sect3>
<title>Before installing from Floppies</title>
<para>If you must install from floppy disk (which we suggest you
do not do), either due to unsupported hardware or simply because
you insist on doing things the hard way, you must first prepare
some floppies for the install.</para>
do <emphasis>NOT</emphasis> do), either due to unsupported
hardware or simply because you insist on doing things the hard
way, you must first prepare some floppies for the install.</para>
<para>At a minimum, you will need as many 1.44MB or 1.2MB floppies
as it takes to hold all the files in the