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@@ -90,16 +90,14 @@
       <para>Welcome to &os;! This handbook covers the installation
 	and day to day use of
 	<emphasis>&os; &rel2.current;-RELEASE</emphasis> and
-	<emphasis>&os; &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.  This
+	<emphasis>&os; &rel.current;-RELEASE</emphasis>.  This book is
-	book is the result of ongoing work by many individuals.  Some sections might be
+	the result of ongoing work by many individuals.  Some sections
-	outdated.  Those interested in helping to update and expand
+	might be outdated.  Those interested in helping to update and
-	this document should send email to the &a.doc;.</para>
+	expand this document should send email to the &a.doc;.</para>
 
-      <para>The latest
+      <para>The latest version of this book is available from the
-
+	<link xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/">FreeBSD web
-	version of this book is available from the <link
+	  site</link>.  Previous versions can be obtained from <uri
-	  xlink:href="http://www.FreeBSD.org/">FreeBSD web site</link>.
-	Previous versions can be obtained from <uri
 	  xlink:href="http://docs.FreeBSD.org/doc/">http://docs.FreeBSD.org/doc/</uri>.
 	The book can be downloaded in a variety of formats and
 	compression options from the <link
@@ -108,7 +106,8 @@
 	<link linkend="mirrors-ftp">mirror sites</link>.  Printed
 	copies can be purchased at the
 	<link xlink:href="http://www.freebsdmall.com/">FreeBSD
-	  Mall</link>.  Searches can be performed on the handbook and other documents on the
+	  Mall</link>.  Searches can be performed on the handbook and
+	other documents on the
 	<link xlink:href="&url.base;/search/index.html">search
 	  page</link>.</para>
     </abstract>
@@ -120,8 +119,8 @@
     <title>Getting Started</title>
 
     <partintro>
-      <para>This part of the handbook is for users and
+      <para>This part of the handbook is for users and administrators
-	administrators who are new to &os;.  These chapters:</para>
+	who are new to &os;.  These chapters:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -142,15 +141,15 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Introduce X, the &unix; windowing system, and
+	  <para>Introduce X, the &unix; windowing system, and detail
-	    detail how to configure a desktop environment that makes
+	    how to configure a desktop environment that makes users
-	    users more productive.</para>
+	    more productive.</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
       <para>The number of forward references in the text have been
-	kept to a minimum so that this section
+	kept to a minimum so that this section can be read from front
-	can be read from front to back with minimal page flipping.</para>
+	to back with minimal page flipping.</para>
     </partintro>
 
     &chap.introduction;
@@ -165,19 +164,19 @@
 
     <partintro>
       <para>Now that the basics have been covered, this part of the
-	book discusses some frequently used features of
+	book discusses some frequently used features of &os;.  These
-	&os;.  These chapters:</para>
+	chapters:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Introduce popular and useful desktop
+	  <para>Introduce popular and useful desktop applications:
-	    applications: browsers, productivity tools, document
+	    browsers, productivity tools, document viewers, and
-	    viewers, and more.</para>
+	    more.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>Introduce a number of multimedia tools
+	  <para>Introduce a number of multimedia tools available for
-	    available for &os;.</para>
+	    &os;.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
@@ -196,9 +195,9 @@
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
-      <para>Some of these chapters recommend prior
+      <para>Some of these chapters recommend prior reading, and this
-	reading, and this is noted in the synopsis at the beginning of
+	is noted in the synopsis at the beginning of each
-	each chapter.</para>
+	chapter.</para>
     </partintro>
 
     &chap.desktop;
@@ -212,16 +211,16 @@
     <title>System Administration</title>
 
     <partintro>
-      <para>The remaining chapters cover all
+      <para>The remaining chapters cover all aspects of &os; system
-	aspects of &os; system administration.  Each chapter starts
+	administration.  Each chapter starts by describing what will
-	by describing what will be learned as a result of reading the
+	be learned as a result of reading the chapter, and also
-	chapter, and also details what the reader is expected to know before
+	details what the reader is expected to know before tackling
-	tackling the material.</para>
+	the material.</para>
 
       <para>These chapters are designed to be read as the information
-	is needed.  They do not need to be read in any
+	is needed.  They do not need to be read in any particular
-	particular order, nor must all of them be read before
+	order, nor must all of them be read before beginning to use
-	beginning to use &os;.</para>
+	&os;.</para>
     </partintro>
 
     &chap.config;
@@ -244,9 +243,9 @@
     <title>Network Communication</title>
 
     <partintro>
-      <para>&os; is one of the most widely deployed operating
+      <para>&os; is one of the most widely deployed operating systems
-	systems for high performance network servers.  The chapters in
+	for high performance network servers.  The chapters in this
-	this part cover:</para>
+	part cover:</para>
 
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
@@ -254,7 +253,8 @@
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para><acronym>PPP</acronym> and <acronym>PPP</acronym> over Ethernet</para>
+	  <para><acronym>PPP</acronym> and <acronym>PPP</acronym> over
+	    Ethernet</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
@@ -286,7 +286,6 @@
     &chap.network-servers;
     &chap.firewalls;
     &chap.advanced-networking;
-
   </part>
 
   <part xml:id="appendices">