From c206b7579bae1d661f3957049c7e725456135c6d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 17 Aug 2005 10:38:40 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] More minor smithing.
---
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml | 12 ++++++------
1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml
index c45ec340ef..fdf478ec85 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
<sect2 id="releases">
<title>Releases</title>
- <para><literal>releases</literal> are named with a <firstterm>major
+ <para><literal>Releases</literal> are named with a <firstterm>major
version number</firstterm> and <firstterm>minor version
number</firstterm>.<para>
@@ -126,8 +126,8 @@
</sect2>
<sect2 id="ports-vs-packages">
- <title><firstterm>ports</firstterm> versus
- <firstterm>PACKAGES</firstterm></title>
+ <title><firstterm>Ports</firstterm> versus
+ <firstterm>Packages</firstterm></title>
<para>Separately from the files distributed above, &os;
supports thousands of applications that are developed by third
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
programs to be installed (termed the <firstterm>Ports
Collection</firstterm>). Applications may be installed
either from source, if its licensing terms allow such
- redistribution (these are termed <literal>ports</literal>,
+ redistribution (these are termed <literal>ports</literal>),
or as compiled binaries if allowed (these are termed
<literal>packages</literal>).</para>
</sect2>
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
be able to better plan for the future.</para>
<para>These considerations, rather than any kind of keeping up with
- the major release number of any other OS, is the main motivation for
+ the major release number of any other OS, comprise the main motivation for
the scheduling changes going forward.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
<title>Conclusion</title>
<para>We hope that this article serves as a useful starting point
- for understand the &os; development model and deciding what version
+ for understanding the &os; development model and deciding what version
is right for your needs.</para>
</sect1>
</article>