Grammar: Run sentence. Use semicolon ';' correctly.

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</sect3info>
<title>ccd (Concatenated Disk Configuration)</title>
<para>When choosing a mass storage solution, the most important
<para>When choosing a mass storage solution the most important
factors to consider are speed, reliability, and cost. It is very
rare to have all three in favor, normally a fast, reliable mass
rare to have all three in favor; normally a fast, reliable mass
storage device is expensive, and to cut back on cost either speed
or reliability must be sacrificed. In designing my system, I
ranked the requirements by most favorable to least favorable. In