Grammar: Run sentence. Use semicolon ';' correctly.
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</sect3info>
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<title>ccd (Concatenated Disk Configuration)</title>
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<title>ccd (Concatenated Disk Configuration)</title>
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<para>When choosing a mass storage solution, the most important
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<para>When choosing a mass storage solution the most important
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factors to consider are speed, reliability, and cost. It is very
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factors to consider are speed, reliability, and cost. It is very
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rare to have all three in favor, normally a fast, reliable mass
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rare to have all three in favor; normally a fast, reliable mass
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storage device is expensive, and to cut back on cost either speed
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storage device is expensive, and to cut back on cost either speed
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or reliability must be sacrificed. In designing my system, I
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or reliability must be sacrificed. In designing my system, I
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ranked the requirements by most favorable to least favorable. In
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ranked the requirements by most favorable to least favorable. In
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