Fix two typos and reword a sentence so it makes sense.

Approved by:	murray, jhb
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Ceri Davies 2002-03-20 14:50:47 +00:00
parent 11526b9238
commit c952f7f788
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/head/; revision=12538

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@ -524,11 +524,11 @@
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
<para>You will almost certainly get a conflict because <para>You will almost certainly get a conflict because
of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.100 2002-03-15 08:28:12 roam Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case, of the <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.101 2002-03-20 14:50:47 ceri Exp $</literal> (or in FreeBSD's case,
<literal>$<!-- stop expansion -->FreeBSD<!-- stop expansion -->$</literal>) lines, so you will have to edit <literal>$<!-- stop expansion -->FreeBSD<!-- stop expansion -->$</literal>) lines, so you will have to edit
the file to resolve the conflict (remove the marker lines and the file to resolve the conflict (remove the marker lines and
the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.100 2002-03-15 08:28:12 roam Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original the second <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.101 2002-03-20 14:50:47 ceri Exp $</literal> line, leaving the original
<literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.100 2002-03-15 08:28:12 roam Exp $</literal> line intact).</para> <literal>$Id: article.sgml,v 1.101 2002-03-20 14:50:47 ceri Exp $</literal> line intact).</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
@ -1246,11 +1246,11 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
replacement for the &a.arch; or the &a.audit;. In fact replacement for the &a.arch; or the &a.audit;. In fact
using it as such hurts the FreeBSD Project as it gives a sense of a using it as such hurts the FreeBSD Project as it gives a sense of a
closed list where general decisions affecting all of the FreeBSD closed list where general decisions affecting all of the FreeBSD
using community are made with out being <quote>open</quote>. using community are made without being <quote>open</quote>.
Last, but not least <emphasis>never, never ever, email Last, but not least <emphasis>never, never ever, email
developers@FreeBSD.org and CC:/BCC: another FreeBSD list</emphasis>. developers@FreeBSD.org and CC:/BCC: another FreeBSD list</emphasis>.
Never, ever email another FreeBSD email list and CC:/BCC: Never, ever email another FreeBSD email list and CC:/BCC:
developers@FreeBSD.org. Doing so can greatly deminish the benefits developers@FreeBSD.org. Doing so can greatly diminish the benefits
of this list. of this list.
</para> </para>
</listitem> </listitem>
@ -1492,7 +1492,7 @@ docs:Documentation Bug:nik:</programlisting>
<para>You were not always a committer. At one time you were <para>You were not always a committer. At one time you were
a contributor. Remember that at all times. Remember what a contributor. Remember that at all times. Remember what
it was like trying to get help and attention. Do not forget it was like trying to get help and attention. Do not forget
that your work as a contributor time was very important to that your work as a contributor was very important to
you. Remember what it was like. Do not discourage, belittle, you. Remember what it was like. Do not discourage, belittle,
or demean contributors. Treat them with respect. They are or demean contributors. Treat them with respect. They are
our committers in waiting. They are every bit as important our committers in waiting. They are every bit as important