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Massage some igor fixes to improve grammar and readability

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Approved by:	hrs (mentor)
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Benjamin Kaduk 2014-09-19 15:33:36 +00:00
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Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00 
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en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/security/chapter.xml
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@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
&lt;/vuln&gt;</programlisting>
<para>The tag names are supposed to be self-explanatory so we
shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be fill
shall take a closer look only at fields which needs to be filled
in:</para>
<calloutlist>
@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
<literal>&lt;le&gt;</literal>,
<literal>&lt;eq&gt;</literal>,
<literal>&lt;ge&gt;</literal>, and
<literal>&lt;gt&gt;</literal> elements. Check the version
<literal>&lt;gt&gt;</literal> elements. Check that the version
ranges given do not overlap.</para>
<para>In a range specification, <literal>*</literal>
@ -411,7 +411,7 @@
<sect2 xml:id="security-notify-vuxml-testing">
<title>Testing Changes to the VuXML Database</title>
<para>Assume a new entry for a
<para>This example describes a new entry for a
vulnerability in the package <literal>clamav</literal> that
has been fixed in version <literal>0.65_7</literal>.</para>
@ -467,7 +467,7 @@
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>packaudit</userinput></screen>
<para>To verify that the <literal>&lt;affected&gt;</literal>
section of the entry will match correct package(s), issue this
section of the entry will match the correct package(s), issue this
command:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>portaudit -f /usr/ports/INDEX -r <replaceable>uuid</replaceable></userinput></screen>