Security advisory chapter minor cleanup:

- Don't use &os; for 'FreeBSD' in the advisory sample header.  It buys
  us nothing but makes it harder to read and the actual name of an
  advisory is FreeBSD-SA-XX:XX.  If we ever were to add (r) to the
  &os; macro the advisory name would then not be corect anymore.

- Fix broken whitespace in advisory sample where it didn't align correct
  note that this is a content change and should be merged by
  translators as it changes the output.

- Don't say "@EMAIL-ADDRESS" in Credits sample - the Security Team
  doesn't actually use mail address for that field, but names.
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@ -3713,15 +3713,15 @@ You are advised to update or deinstall the affected package(s) immediately.</pro
taken from the &a.security-notifications.name; mailing list.</para>
<programlisting>=============================================================================
&os;-SA-XX:XX.UTIL Security Advisory
The &os; Project
FreeBSD-SA-XX:XX.UTIL Security Advisory
The FreeBSD Project
Topic: denial of service due to some problem<co id="co-topic">
Category: core<co id="co-category">
Module: sys<co id="co-module">
Announced: 2003-09-23<co id="co-announce">
Credits: Person@EMAIL-ADDRESS<co id="co-credit">
Credits: Person<co id="co-credit">
Affects: All releases of &os;<co id="co-affects">
&os; 4-STABLE prior to the correction date
Corrected: 2003-09-23 16:42:59 UTC (RELENG_4, 4.9-PRERELEASE)
@ -3733,7 +3733,7 @@ Corrected: 2003-09-23 16:42:59 UTC (RELENG_4, 4.9-PRERELEASE)
2003-09-23 16:51:24 UTC (RELENG_4_5, 4.5-RELEASE-p33)
2003-09-23 16:52:45 UTC (RELENG_4_4, 4.4-RELEASE-p43)
2003-09-23 16:54:39 UTC (RELENG_4_3, 4.3-RELEASE-p39)<co id="co-corrected">
<acronym>CVE</acronym> Name: CVE-XXXX-XXXX<co id="co-cve">
<acronym>CVE</acronym> Name: CVE-XXXX-XXXX<co id="co-cve">
For general information regarding FreeBSD Security Advisories,
including descriptions of the fields above, security branches, and the