Security advisory chapter minor cleanup:

- Don't use &os; for 'FreeBSD' in the advisory sample header.  It buys
  us nothing but makes it harder to read and the actual name of an
  advisory is FreeBSD-SA-XX:XX.  If we ever were to add (r) to the
  &os; macro the advisory name would then not be corect anymore.

- Fix broken whitespace in advisory sample where it didn't align correct
  note that this is a content change and should be merged by
  translators as it changes the output.

- Don't say "@EMAIL-ADDRESS" in Credits sample - the Security Team
  doesn't actually use mail address for that field, but names.
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@ -3713,15 +3713,15 @@ You are advised to update or deinstall the affected package(s) immediately.</pro
taken from the &a.security-notifications.name; mailing list.</para> taken from the &a.security-notifications.name; mailing list.</para>
<programlisting>============================================================================= <programlisting>=============================================================================
&os;-SA-XX:XX.UTIL Security Advisory FreeBSD-SA-XX:XX.UTIL Security Advisory
The &os; Project The FreeBSD Project
Topic: denial of service due to some problem<co id="co-topic"> Topic: denial of service due to some problem<co id="co-topic">
Category: core<co id="co-category"> Category: core<co id="co-category">
Module: sys<co id="co-module"> Module: sys<co id="co-module">
Announced: 2003-09-23<co id="co-announce"> Announced: 2003-09-23<co id="co-announce">
Credits: Person@EMAIL-ADDRESS<co id="co-credit"> Credits: Person<co id="co-credit">
Affects: All releases of &os;<co id="co-affects"> Affects: All releases of &os;<co id="co-affects">
&os; 4-STABLE prior to the correction date &os; 4-STABLE prior to the correction date
Corrected: 2003-09-23 16:42:59 UTC (RELENG_4, 4.9-PRERELEASE) Corrected: 2003-09-23 16:42:59 UTC (RELENG_4, 4.9-PRERELEASE)
@ -3733,7 +3733,7 @@ Corrected: 2003-09-23 16:42:59 UTC (RELENG_4, 4.9-PRERELEASE)
2003-09-23 16:51:24 UTC (RELENG_4_5, 4.5-RELEASE-p33) 2003-09-23 16:51:24 UTC (RELENG_4_5, 4.5-RELEASE-p33)
2003-09-23 16:52:45 UTC (RELENG_4_4, 4.4-RELEASE-p43) 2003-09-23 16:52:45 UTC (RELENG_4_4, 4.4-RELEASE-p43)
2003-09-23 16:54:39 UTC (RELENG_4_3, 4.3-RELEASE-p39)<co id="co-corrected"> 2003-09-23 16:54:39 UTC (RELENG_4_3, 4.3-RELEASE-p39)<co id="co-corrected">
<acronym>CVE</acronym> Name: CVE-XXXX-XXXX<co id="co-cve"> <acronym>CVE</acronym> Name: CVE-XXXX-XXXX<co id="co-cve">
For general information regarding FreeBSD Security Advisories, For general information regarding FreeBSD Security Advisories,
including descriptions of the fields above, security branches, and the including descriptions of the fields above, security branches, and the