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- add   between number and unit
- move a sentence stop out of an ulink description
- use &windows; in titles to be consistent (although the "tm" won't show up)
- Use author entity in Kris Moore's case
- Replace FreeBSD with &os; in a few places
- Add an extra space between a ) and the next word and
- de-capitalize daemon to be consistent [1]

[1] reported by:    lme
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@ -156,7 +156,7 @@
USB are supported. SMP is supported on machines with multiple
CPUs.</para>
<para>A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2GB of RAM.
<para>A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2&nbsp;GB of RAM.
&firewire; is not supported on the Blue & White PowerMac
G3.</para>
</sect3>
@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
<para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at the
<ulink url="&url.base;/where.html#download">&os; web
site.</ulink></para>
site</ulink>.</para>
<tip>
<para>If you already have a copy of &os; on CDROM, DVD, or USB
@ -487,9 +487,9 @@
</warning>
<step>
<title>Obtaining <application>Image Writer for Windows</application></title>
<title>Obtaining <application>Image Writer for &windows;</application></title>
<para><application>Image Writer for Windows</application> is a
<para><application>Image Writer for &windows;</application> is a
free application that can correctly write an image file to a
memory stick. Download it from
<ulink url="https://launchpad.net/win32-image-writer/"></ulink>
@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
for &os;&nbsp;9.0.</para>
<note>
<para>Kris Moore's <application>pc-sysinstall</application> is
<para>&a.kmoore;'s <application>pc-sysinstall</application> is
included with <ulink url="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</ulink>, and
can also be used to <ulink
url="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">
@ -1072,10 +1072,10 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
<warning>
<para>The installation program does not check to see if you have
adequate space. Select this option only if you have
adequate hard disk space. As of FreeBSD&nbsp;9.0, the
FreeBSD Ports Collection takes up about &ports.size; of disk
adequate hard disk space. As of &os;&nbsp;9.0, the
&os; Ports Collection takes up about &ports.size; of disk
space. You can safely assume a larger value for more recent
versions of FreeBSD.</para>
versions of &os;.</para>
</warning>
</listitem>
@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
three partitions:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<title>Standard FreeBSD <acronym>GPT</acronym> Partitions</title>
<title>Standard &os; <acronym>GPT</acronym> Partitions</title>
<listitem>
<para><literal>freebsd-boot</literal> - &os; boot code. This
partition must be first on the disk.</para>
@ -1878,7 +1878,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
<title>Additional Services</title>
<listitem>
<para><literal>sshd</literal> - Secure Shell
(<acronym role="Secure Shell">SSH</acronym>)Daemon for secure
(<acronym role="Secure Shell">SSH</acronym>) daemon for secure
remote access.</para>
</listitem>