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- add   between number and unit
- move a sentence stop out of an ulink description
- use &windows; in titles to be consistent (although the "tm" won't show up)
- Use author entity in Kris Moore's case
- Replace FreeBSD with &os; in a few places
- Add an extra space between a ) and the next word and
- de-capitalize daemon to be consistent [1]

[1] reported by:    lme
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USB are supported. SMP is supported on machines with multiple USB are supported. SMP is supported on machines with multiple
CPUs.</para> CPUs.</para>
<para>A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2GB of RAM. <para>A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2&nbsp;GB of RAM.
&firewire; is not supported on the Blue & White PowerMac &firewire; is not supported on the Blue & White PowerMac
G3.</para> G3.</para>
</sect3> </sect3>
@ -404,7 +404,7 @@
<para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at the <para>Copies of &os; installation media are available at the
<ulink url="&url.base;/where.html#download">&os; web <ulink url="&url.base;/where.html#download">&os; web
site.</ulink></para> site</ulink>.</para>
<tip> <tip>
<para>If you already have a copy of &os; on CDROM, DVD, or USB <para>If you already have a copy of &os; on CDROM, DVD, or USB
@ -487,9 +487,9 @@
</warning> </warning>
<step> <step>
<title>Obtaining <application>Image Writer for Windows</application></title> <title>Obtaining <application>Image Writer for &windows;</application></title>
<para><application>Image Writer for Windows</application> is a <para><application>Image Writer for &windows;</application> is a
free application that can correctly write an image file to a free application that can correctly write an image file to a
memory stick. Download it from memory stick. Download it from
<ulink url="https://launchpad.net/win32-image-writer/"></ulink> <ulink url="https://launchpad.net/win32-image-writer/"></ulink>
@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
for &os;&nbsp;9.0.</para> for &os;&nbsp;9.0.</para>
<note> <note>
<para>Kris Moore's <application>pc-sysinstall</application> is <para>&a.kmoore;'s <application>pc-sysinstall</application> is
included with <ulink url="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</ulink>, and included with <ulink url="http://pcbsd.org">PC-BSD</ulink>, and
can also be used to <ulink can also be used to <ulink
url="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD"> url="http://wiki.pcbsd.org/index.php/Use_PC-BSD_Installer_to_Install_FreeBSD">
@ -1072,10 +1072,10 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
<warning> <warning>
<para>The installation program does not check to see if you have <para>The installation program does not check to see if you have
adequate space. Select this option only if you have adequate space. Select this option only if you have
adequate hard disk space. As of FreeBSD&nbsp;9.0, the adequate hard disk space. As of &os;&nbsp;9.0, the
FreeBSD Ports Collection takes up about &ports.size; of disk &os; Ports Collection takes up about &ports.size; of disk
space. You can safely assume a larger value for more recent space. You can safely assume a larger value for more recent
versions of FreeBSD.</para> versions of &os;.</para>
</warning> </warning>
</listitem> </listitem>
@ -1315,7 +1315,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
three partitions:</para> three partitions:</para>
<itemizedlist> <itemizedlist>
<title>Standard FreeBSD <acronym>GPT</acronym> Partitions</title> <title>Standard &os; <acronym>GPT</acronym> Partitions</title>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para><literal>freebsd-boot</literal> - &os; boot code. This <para><literal>freebsd-boot</literal> - &os; boot code. This
partition must be first on the disk.</para> partition must be first on the disk.</para>
@ -1878,7 +1878,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/iso9660/FREEBSD_INSTALL [ro]...</screen>
<title>Additional Services</title> <title>Additional Services</title>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para><literal>sshd</literal> - Secure Shell <para><literal>sshd</literal> - Secure Shell
(<acronym role="Secure Shell">SSH</acronym>)Daemon for secure (<acronym role="Secure Shell">SSH</acronym>) daemon for secure
remote access.</para> remote access.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>