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Minor word niggles on the snapshot page:

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- if something is obvious, don't say it
- use &os;
- people don't really use netnews
- don't discourage bug submissions about documentation

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These are <em>not</em> releases, these are <em>snapshots</em>, These are <em>not</em> releases, these are <em>snapshots</em>,
and it is important that this distinction be preserved. and it is important that this distinction be preserved.
Although people can and will, of course, refer to snapshots Although people can and will, of course, refer to snapshots
by date in mail or netnews, do not confuse them.</li> by date in email, do not confuse them.</li>
<li>Snapshots might not include package sets, but will generally <li>Snapshots might not include package sets, but will generally
include a ports tree.</li> include a ports tree.</li>
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For example, <tt>README</tt> may still refer For example, <tt>README</tt> may still refer
to a previous release. This is because that is much less important to a previous release. This is because that is much less important
than getting the real bug fixes and new features out for testing. than getting the real bug fixes and new features out for testing.
Please do not send a bug report about the documentation.</li> Please do not send a bug report about version numbers.</li>
</ul> </ul>
<p>Your feedback on these snapshots is, of course, greatly welcome. <p>Your feedback on these snapshots is greatly welcome.
They are not just for our benefit - those who are coming to rely They are not just for our benefit - those who are coming to rely
on FreeBSD for mission critical applications should welcome on &os; for mission critical applications should welcome
a chance to get at more updated bits in a structured fashion. a chance to get at more updated bits in a structured fashion.
You can also use these snapshots as tangible evidence that your You can also use these snapshots as tangible evidence that your
feedback is getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) will not have feedback is getting incorporated and that you (hopefully) will not have