It's typically considered bad style to refer to the reader using "you".

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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Packages do not require you to understand the process
<para>Packages do not require any understanding of the process
involved in compiling software on FreeBSD.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
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<envar>FTP_PASSIVE_MODE</envar>, <envar>FTP_PROXY</envar>, and
<envar>FTP_PASSWORD</envar>. You may need to set one or more
of these if you are behind a firewall, or need to use an
FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list. You
can also note that in the example above
FTP/HTTP proxy. See &man.fetch.3; for the complete list.
Note that in the example above
<literal>lsof</literal> is used instead of
<literal>lsof-4.56.4</literal>. When the remote fetching
feature is used, the version number of the package must be