From cd110df402fdc4ccb08e1ac64c218290878e135d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sun, 8 Dec 2002 20:55:18 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] 	- natd address translation -> Network Address
 Translation 	- IPSec -> IPsec 	- mozilla+ipv6 was removed from the
 ports tree some time ago, 	  so reference mozilla instead 	- Remove a
 contradiction 	- punctuation fixes

PR:		docs/46093
Submitted by:	Christian Brueffer <chris@unixpages.org>
---
 .../handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml     | 15 ++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
index 846f95e36e..f86bbe8749 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
@@ -6236,11 +6236,12 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
 	  anymore since private address spaces
 	  (<hostid role="ipaddr">10.0.0.0/8</hostid>,
 	  <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0/24</hostid>,
-	  etc.) and natd address translation are being employed.</para>
+	  etc.) and Network Address Translation (<acronym>NAT</acronym>) are
+	  being employed.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>Router table entries were getting to large.  This is
+	<para>Router table entries were getting too large.  This is
 	  still a concern today.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -6251,7 +6252,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
       <listitem>
 	<para>128 bit address space.  In other words theoretically there are
 	  340,282,366,920,938,463,463,374,607,431,768,211,456 addresses
-	  available.  This means there are approximately.
+	  available.  This means there are approximately
 	  6.67 * 10^27 IPv6 addresses per square meter on our planet.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -6278,7 +6279,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>IPSec (IP Security)</para>
+	<para>IPsec (IP security)</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -6468,7 +6469,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
       <para>This output will differ from machine to machine.  By now you should be
 	able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net">www.kame.net</ulink>
 	and see the dancing tortoise - that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as
-	<filename role="package">mozilla+ipv6</filename>.</para>
+	<filename role="package">mozilla</filename>.</para>
 
     </sect2>
 
@@ -6482,7 +6483,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
 	</listitem>
 
 	<listitem>
-	  <para>A6records</para>
+	  <para>A6 records</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -6491,7 +6492,7 @@ round-trip min/avg/max/stddev = 2.530/2.643/2.774/0.103 ms</screen>
 
       <programlisting>MYHOSTNAME           AAAA    MYIPv6ADDR</programlisting>
 
-      <para>To your primary zone DNS file.  In case you don't serve your own
+      <para>To your primary zone DNS file.  In case you do not serve your own
 	<acronym>DNS</acronym> zones ask your <acronym>DNS</acronym> provider.
 	Current versions of <application>bind</application> (version 8.3 and 9)
 	support AAAA records.</para>