- Various rewordings, style and grammar fixes.

- Some common sense changes: use of 50 instead of 100 for the volume
  channel example.

PR:		docs/114718
Submitted by:	Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com>

en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
       applications allowing you to edit your recorded audio, add sound
       effects, and control attached MIDI devices.</para>
 
-    <para>With some willingness to experiment, FreeBSD can support
+    <para>With some experimentation, &os; can support
       playback of video files and DVD's.  The number of applications
       to encode, convert, and playback various video media is more
       limited than the number of sound applications.  For example as
@@ -52,8 +52,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Methods to test that your card is working using
+        <para>Methods to test whether your card is working.</para>
-          sample applications.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -78,7 +77,7 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>How to rip CD and DVD information into files.</para>
+        <para>How to rip CD and DVD content into files.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -140,7 +139,7 @@
       FreeBSD supports a wide variety of both PCI and ISA cards.
       Check the supported audio devices list of the <ulink
       url="&rel.current.hardware;">Hardware Notes</ulink> to see if
-      your card is supported.  This document will also mention which
+      your card is supported.  The Hardware Notes will also mention which
       driver supports your card.</para>
 
     <indexterm>
@@ -190,14 +189,14 @@
     <sect3>
       <title>Configuring a Custom Kernel with Sound Support</title>
 
-      <para>The first thing to do is adding the generic audio driver
+      <para>The first thing to do is add the audio framework driver
-	&man.sound.4; to the kernel, for that you will need to
+	&man.sound.4; to the kernel; for that you will need to
 	add the following line to the kernel configuration file:</para>
 
       <programlisting>device sound</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Then we have to add the support for our sound card.
+      <para>Next, you have to add the support for your sound card.
-	Therefore, we need to know which driver supports the card.
+	Therefore, you need to know which driver supports the card.
 	Check the supported audio devices list of the <ulink
 	url="&rel.current.hardware;">Hardware Notes</ulink>, to
 	determine the correct driver for your sound card.  For
@@ -208,24 +207,24 @@
       <programlisting>device snd_emu10k1</programlisting>
 
       <para>Be sure to read the manual page of the driver for the
-	syntax to use.  Information regarding the syntax of sound
+	syntax to use.  The explicit syntax for the kernel configuration
-	drivers in the kernel configuration can also be found in the
+	of every supported sound driver can also be found in the
 	<filename>/usr/src/sys/conf/NOTES</filename> file.</para>
 
-      <para>Non-PnP ISA cards may require you to provide the kernel
+      <para>Non-PnP ISA sound cards may require you to provide the kernel
-	with information on the sound card settings (IRQ, I/O port,
+	with information on the card settings (IRQ, I/O port,
-	etc).  This is done via the
+	etc), as is true of all non-PnP ISA cards.  This is done via the
-	<filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file.  At system boot,
+	<filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file.  During the boot process,
 	the &man.loader.8; will read this file and pass the settings
 	to the kernel.  For example, an old
 	Creative &soundblaster; 16 ISA non-PnP card will use the
-	&man.snd.sbc.4; driver in conjunction with snd_sb16(4).  For this card the following lines have to be added to
+	&man.snd.sbc.4; driver in conjunction with <literal>snd_sb16</literal>.  For this card the following lines must be added to
 	the kernel configuration file:</para>
 
       <programlisting>device snd_sbc
 device snd_sb16</programlisting>
 
-      <para>as well as the following in
+      <para>and these to
 	<filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>hint.sbc.0.at="isa"
@@ -239,12 +238,13 @@ hint.sbc.0.flags="0x15"</programlisting>
 
       <para>The syntax used in the
 	<filename>/boot/device.hints</filename> file is covered in the
-	sound driver manual page.</para>
+	&man.sound.4; driver manual page and the manual page
+	for the driver in question.</para>
 
       <para>The settings shown above are the defaults.  In some
 	cases, you may need to change the IRQ or the other settings to
 	match your card.  See the &man.snd.sbc.4; manual page for more
-	information.</para>
+	information about this card.</para>
     </sect3>
   </sect2>
 
@@ -269,14 +269,14 @@ pcm0: &lt;Intel ICH3 (82801CA)&gt; at io 0xd800, 0xdc80 irq 5 bufsz 16384
 kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
 
     <para>The output from your system may vary.  If no
-      <devicename>pcm</devicename> devices show up, go back and review
+      <devicename>pcm</devicename> devices are listed, go back and review
       what was done earlier.  Go through your kernel
       configuration file again and make sure the correct
-      device is chosen.  Common problems are listed in <xref
+      device driver was chosen.  Common problems are listed in <xref
       linkend="troubleshooting">.</para>
 
     <para>If all goes well, you should now have a functioning sound
-      card.  If your CD-ROM or DVD-ROM drive is properly coupled to
+      card.  If your CD-ROM or DVD-ROM drive's audio-out pins are properly connected to
       your sound card, you can put a CD in the drive and play it
       with &man.cdcontrol.1;:</para>
 
@@ -286,8 +286,10 @@ kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
       role="package">audio/workman</filename> can provide a friendlier
       interface.  You may want to install an application such as
       <filename role="package">audio/mpg123</filename> to listen to
-      MP3 audio files.  A quick way to test the card is sending data
+      MP3 audio files.</para>
-      to the <filename>/dev/dsp</filename>, like this:</para>
+
+    <para>Another quick way to test the card is sending data
+      to <filename>/dev/dsp</filename>, like this:</para>
 
     <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>cat <replaceable>filename</replaceable> &gt; /dev/dsp</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -317,12 +319,6 @@ kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
           </thead>
 
 	  <tbody>
-	    <row>
-	      <entry><errorname>unsupported subdevice XX</errorname></entry>
-	      <entry><para>One or more of the device nodes was not created
-	        correctly.  Repeat the steps above.</para></entry>
-            </row>
-
             <row>
               <entry><errorname>sb_dspwr(XX) timed out</errorname></entry>
               <entry><para>The I/O port is not set correctly.</para></entry>
@@ -372,9 +368,9 @@ kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
       sound device with a certain application.</para>
 
     <para>FreeBSD lets you do this through <emphasis>Virtual Sound
-      Channels</emphasis>, which can be set with the &man.sysctl.8;
+      Channels</emphasis>, which can be enabled with the &man.sysctl.8;
       facility.  Virtual channels allow you to multiplex your sound
-      card's playback channels by mixing sound in the kernel.</para>
+      card's playback by mixing sound in the kernel.</para>
 
     <para>To set the number of virtual channels, there are two sysctl
       knobs which, if you are the <username>root</username> user, can
@@ -406,7 +402,8 @@ kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
       where <replaceable>x</replaceable> is 0 to 3 if
       <varname>hw.snd.pcm.0.vchans</varname> is set to 4 as in the
       above example.  On a system using &man.devfs.5;, the above will
-      automatically be allocated transparently to the user.</para>
+      automatically be allocated transparently to a program
+      that requests <filename>/dev/dsp0</filename>.</para>
    </sect2>
 
   <sect2>
@@ -424,17 +421,17 @@ kld snd_ich (1p/2r/0v channels duplex default)</screen>
 
     <para>The default values for the different mixer channels are
       hardcoded in the sourcecode of the &man.pcm.4; driver.  There are
-      a lot of different applications and daemons that allow
+      many different applications and daemons that allow
-      you to set values for the mixer they remember and set
+      you to set values for the mixer that are remembered between
-      each time they are started, but this is not a clean
+      invocations, but this is not a clean solution.  It is possible
-      solution, we want to have default values at the driver
+      to set default mixer values at the driver level &mdash; this
-      level.  This is accomplished by defining the appropriate
+      is accomplished by defining the appropriate
-      values in <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>. E.g.:</para>
+      values in <filename>/boot/device.hints</filename>, e.g.:</para>
 
-<programlisting>hint.pcm.0.vol="100"</programlisting>
+<programlisting>hint.pcm.0.vol="50"</programlisting>
 
     <para>This will set the volume channel to a default value of
-      100, when the &man.pcm.4; module is loaded.</para>
+      50 when the &man.pcm.4; module is loaded.</para>
   </sect2>
 </sect1>