diff --git a/en/marketing/os-comparison.sgml b/en/marketing/os-comparison.sgml index 2f7a131a10..018108c58b 100644 --- a/en/marketing/os-comparison.sgml +++ b/en/marketing/os-comparison.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %includes; @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ is unable to handle heavy network loads. A few organizations try to make it work as an Internet server. For instance, barnesandnoble.com uses Windows NT, as can be verified by the - error massages that their webserver produces, such as this + error messages that their webserver produces, such as this recent example Error Message: [Microsoft][ODBC SQL Server Driver][SQL Server] Can't allocate space for object 'queryHistory' in database 'web' because the 'default' segment @@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ href="#3">3.

[Bad]Microsoft claims that their products are secure, but they offer no guarantee, and their - software is now available for inspection or peer review. Since - Windows is closed course there is no way for users to + software is not available for inspection or peer review. Since + Windows is closed source there is no way for users to fix or diagnose any of the security compromises that are regular published about Microsoft systems.