Remove duplicate text from the introduction and move it into the

abstract.  Simplify some of the text from both sections.

Reviewed by:	doc
Approved by:	jkois (mentor)
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<releaseinfo>$FreeBSD$</releaseinfo>
<abstract>
<para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions
&rel2.relx; and &rel.relx;.
If you are interested in helping with
this project, send email to the &a.doc;. The latest version of
<para>This is the FAQ for &os; versions &rel2.relx; and
&rel.relx;. Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as
informative as possible; if you have any suggestions as to how
it may be improved, please feel free to mail them to the
&a.doc;.</para>
<para>The latest version of
this document is always available from the <ulink
url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/index.html">&os; website</ulink>.
It may also be downloaded as one large <ulink
url="book.html">HTML</ulink> file with HTTP or as a variety
of other formats from the <ulink
url="ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/">&os; FTP
server</ulink>. You may also want to <ulink
url="&url.base;/search/index.html">Search the FAQ</ulink>.</para>
server</ulink>.</para>
</abstract>
</bookinfo>
<chapter id="introduction">
<title>Introduction</title>
<para>Welcome to the &os;
&rel2.relx;&nbsp;- and &rel.relx;&nbsp;-
FAQ!</para>
<para>As is usual with Usenet FAQs, this document aims to cover the
most frequently asked questions concerning the &os; operating
system (and of course answer them!). Although originally intended
to reduce bandwidth and avoid the same old questions being asked
over and over again, FAQs have become recognized as valuable
information resources.</para>
<para>Every effort has been made to make this FAQ as informative as
possible; if you have any suggestions as to how it may be
improved, please feel free to mail them to the &a.doc;.</para>
<qandaset>
<qandaentry>
<question id="what-is-FreeBSD">