diff --git a/en/gnome/news.xml b/en/gnome/news.xml
index 5914110120..854b5d9af2 100644
--- a/en/gnome/news.xml
+++ b/en/gnome/news.xml
@@ -41,9 +41,9 @@ encoding="ISO-8859-1" ?>
           freeze! This new release is jam-packed with
           <a
           href="http://www.gnome.org/start/2.10/notes/rnwhatsnew.html">
-          changes</a>,
+          changes</a>
 
-          including some brand new
+          , including some brand new
           <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html#q1">goodies</a>
 
           now available on FreeBSD. Be sure to check out our
@@ -51,9 +51,9 @@ encoding="ISO-8859-1" ?>
 
           prior to jumping in. For those that do not want to spend time
           compiling, packages for i386 are almost done building on our
-          <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>.
+          <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>
 
-          </p>
+          .</p>
         </event>
       </day>
 
@@ -67,18 +67,19 @@ encoding="ISO-8859-1" ?>
           over. Thanks to all the artists that submitted
           <a
           href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/">
-          entries</a>.
+          entries</a>
 
-          Our
+          . Our
           <a
           href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/franz_klammer-2.png">
           winning entry</a>
 
-          was designed by Franz Klammer, and is the default GNOME 2.10
-          splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike previous release,
-          all other entries have also been installed. You can use the
-          deskutils/splashsetter port to choose the one you like
-          best.</p>
+          was designed by Franz Klammer (based on the default GNOME
+          2.10 splashscreen by Sami "alump" Viitanen), and is the
+          default GNOME 2.10 splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike
+          previous release, all other entries have also been installed.
+          You can use the deskutils/splashsetter port to choose the one
+          you like best.</p>
         </event>
       </day>
     </month>