From d70223cc12369089ff2a8c9b9c0a363e659bf88c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Adam Weinberger Date: Sun, 28 Dec 2003 02:08:35 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Grammar and spelling nits, and add a bit of verbosity to the PLZ HELP US section. --- en/gnome/docs/develfaq.sgml | 22 ++++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/gnome/docs/develfaq.sgml b/en/gnome/docs/develfaq.sgml index 04d52af8c5..0f9f1e4667 100644 --- a/en/gnome/docs/develfaq.sgml +++ b/en/gnome/docs/develfaq.sgml @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ - + %gnomeincludes; %includes; @@ -101,12 +101,12 @@ STRIP=

The long answer is that keeping up-to-date with the GNOME development branch is complicated. Sometimes components change - in a way that makes portupgrade fail, or causes strange end results. + in a way that makes portupgrade fail, or causes strange end results. If you plan to track the development branch, it is a good idea to join the - freebsd-gnome mailing list, as well as join the - #freebsd-gnome IRC channel on FreeNode.

+ freebsd-gnome mailing list, as well as to join the + #freebsd-gnome IRC channel on FreeNode (irc.freenode.net).

If all of this sounds scary, or you need a desktop that "Just Works," you should stick with the stable GNOME branch.

@@ -118,10 +118,10 @@ STRIP=

It depends. If you think the problem is truly a bug with the GNOME component, you can report a bug using bug-buddy or - through the GNOME BugZilla + the GNOME BugZilla interface (NOTE: Evolution's BugZilla interface can be found here). If you think - the problem lies in the FreeBSD port, or is FreeBSD-specific, send + the problem lies in a FreeBSD port, or is FreeBSD-specific, send email to &email;@FreeBSD.org, or report the problem on the #freebsd-gnome IRC channel on FreeNode.

@@ -135,10 +135,10 @@ STRIP=
  • How can I help with the development versions?

    -

    Currently, we need people to test as much as possible, and file as +

    Currently, we need people to test as much as possible, and to file as many good bugs as possible. We also need people with artistic skills to create some hot - screeshots.

    + screenshots.

    If you like coding, and you know Perl, we really need someone to help in porting @@ -146,6 +146,12 @@ STRIP= gnome-system-tools. Please contact marcus@FreeBSD.org if you are interested in helping with this.

    + +

    Even if you don't like working directly with code, we need reports on experiences + upgrading from GNOME &gnomever; to GNOME &gnomedevelver;; we need information on + which apps are exhibiting strange behaviour; we need to know in advance everything + that an end-user is likely to wind up scratching his or her head about in the future. +