Clarity and stuffiness tweaks.

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Adam Weinberger 2005-08-09 03:37:50 +00:00
parent 75bafb19d2
commit d787912aba
Notes: svn2git 2020-12-08 03:00:23 +00:00
svn path=/www/; revision=25334

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<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.68 2005/07/15 06:08:02 marcus Exp $ -->
<!-- $FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.69 2005/07/16 02:33:44 marcus Exp $ -->
<xsl:stylesheet xmlns:xsl="http://www.w3.org/1999/XSL/Transform"
xmlns:rdf="http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#"
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<xsl:import href="includes.xsl"/>
<xsl:variable name="base" select="'..'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.68 2005/07/15 06:08:02 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="date" select="'$FreeBSD: www/en/gnome/index.xsl,v 1.69 2005/07/16 02:33:44 marcus Exp $'"/>
<xsl:variable name="title" select="'FreeBSD GNOME Project'"/>
<xsl:output type="html" encoding="iso-8859-1"
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<img src="{$base}/gnome/images/gnome.png" align="right"
border="0" alt="GNOME Logo"/>
<p>GNOME is a complete desktop experience.
Altogether, the GNOME desktop environment and
the associated comprehensive suite of applications
provide an easy to use, attractive, powerful, and
homogenized environment.
The FreeBSD GNOME Project is a team of devoted
committers and users that manage the integration
of GNOME and FreeBSD.</p>
<p>GNOME is a complete desktop environment, and a
comprehensive suite of applications. In GNOME,
everything is easy-to-use, attractive, powerful,
and works the way you expect it to.</p>
<p>The major components of GNOME are:</p>
<ul>
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and components to develop powerful applications on Unix.</li>
</ul>
<p>The FreeBSD GNOME Project is a team of devoted
committers and users that manage the integration
of GNOME and FreeBSD.</p>
<p>For more information about GNOME, check out
the GNOME Project's
"<a href="http://www.gnome.org/about/">What is GNOME?</a>"