From dabda76e8daebca8d002a025dc3ecc140fb82245 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chern Lee <chern@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2003 21:26:52 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Remove a superflous comma Add a blurb explaining <keycap>
 combinations Change "rendered" to "shown" for simplicity

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---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml
index 6ba9ae1559..ac38c54b55 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/preface/preface.sgml
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
   Audience</bridgehead>
 
   <para>The FreeBSD newcomer will find that the first section of this
-    book guides the user through the FreeBSD installation process, and
+    book guides the user through the FreeBSD installation process and
     gently introduces the concepts and conventions that underpin &unix;.
     Working through this section requires little more than the desire
     to explore, and the ability to take on board new concepts as they
@@ -389,9 +389,9 @@
   <bridgehead id="preface-conv-commands"
   renderas=sect2>User Input</bridgehead>
 
-  <para>Keys are rendered in <keycap>bold</keycap> to stand out from
+  <para>Keys are shown in <keycap>bold</keycap> to stand out from
     other text.  Key combinations that are meant to be typed
-    simultaneously are rendered with `<literal>+</literal>' between
+    simultaneously are shown with `<literal>+</literal>' between
     the keys, such as:</para>
 
   <para>
@@ -402,6 +402,9 @@
     </keycombo>
   </para>
 
+  <para>Meaning the user should type the <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>,
+    <keycap>Alt</keycap>,and <keycap>Del</keycap> keys at the same time.
+
   <para>Keys that are meant to be typed in sequence will be separated with
     commas, for example:</para>