diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ipsec-must/article.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ipsec-must/article.sgml index a5562b631e..9e2cf64cb7 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ipsec-must/article.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/ipsec-must/article.sgml @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ The Problem - First, let's assume you have + First, lets assume you have installed IPsec. How do you know it is working? Sure, your connection will not work if it is misconfigured, and it will work @@ -55,12 +55,12 @@ - encrypted data is uniformly distributed, i.e., has maximal + Encrypted data is uniformly distributed, i.e., has maximal entropy per symbol; - raw, uncompressed data is typically redundant, i.e., has + Raw, uncompressed data is typically redundant, i.e., has sub-maximal entropy. @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ from- your network interface. Then you could see the difference between unencrypted data and encrypted data. This would be true even if some of the data in encrypted mode was - not encrypted---as the outermost IP header must be, if the + not encrypted---as the outermost IP header must be if the packet is to be routable. @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ interface in your kernel's config file. - The command + The command: tcpdump -c 4000 -s 10000 -w dumpfile.bin @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ Expected value for L=8 is 7.1836656 Installing IPsec Most of the modern versions of FreeBSD have IPsec support - in their base source. So you will probably will need to include + in their base source. So you will need to include the option in your kernel config and, after kernel rebuild and reinstall, configure IPsec connections using &man.setkey.8; command. @@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ Expected value for L=8 is 7.1836656 src/sys/i386/conf/KERNELNAME This needs to be present in the kernel config file in order - to be able to capture network data with &man.tcpdump.1;. Be sure + to capture network data with &man.tcpdump.1;. Be sure to run &man.config.8; after adding this, and rebuild and reinstall.