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Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D12075
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<orderedlist>
<listitem>
<para>Read through the FAQ and Handbook periodically. If
anything is badly explained, out of date or even just
completely wrong, let us know. Even better, send us a fix
anything is poorly explained, ambiguous, out of date or
incorrect, let us know. Even better, send us a fix
(Docbook is not difficult to learn, but there is no
objection to ASCII submissions).</para>
</listitem>
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<para>Help translate FreeBSD documentation into your native
language. If documentation already exists for your
language, you can help translate additional documents or
verify that the translations are up-to-date. First take a
look at the <link xlink:href="&url.books.fdp-primer;/translations.html">Translations
verify that the translations are up-to-date and correct.
First take a look at the <link
xlink:href="&url.books.fdp-primer;/translations.html">Translations
FAQ</link> in the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer.
You are not committing yourself to translating every
single FreeBSD document by doing this &mdash; as a
@ -109,8 +110,8 @@
even regularly). It can be very satisfying to share your
expertise and help people solve their problems; sometimes
you may even learn something new yourself! These forums
can also be a source of ideas for things to work
on.</para>
can also be a source of ideas for things to improve upon.
</para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
</sect2>
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<sect2 xml:id="ongoing-programmer-tasks">
<title>Ongoing Programmer Tasks</title>
<para>Most of the tasks listed here require either a
considerable investment of time, or an in-depth knowledge of
<para>Most of the tasks listed here may require a
considerable investment of time, an in-depth knowledge of
the FreeBSD kernel, or both. However, there are also many
useful tasks which are suitable for
<quote>weekend hackers</quote>.</para>
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</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>Read the &a.bugs;. There might be a problem you can
<para>Read the &a.bugs;. There may be a problem you can
comment constructively on or with patches you can test.
Or you could even try to fix one of the problems
yourself.</para>
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site</link>.</para>
<para>More information about the FreeBSD Foundation can be
found in <link xlink:href="https://people.FreeBSD.org/~jdp/foundation/announcement.html">The
found in <link
xlink:href="https://people.FreeBSD.org/~jdp/foundation/announcement.html">The
FreeBSD Foundation -- an Introduction</link>. To contact
the Foundation by email, write to
<email>bod@FreeBSDFoundation.org</email>.</para>