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<orderedlist> <orderedlist>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>Read through the FAQ and Handbook periodically. If <para>Read through the FAQ and Handbook periodically. If
anything is badly explained, out of date or even just anything is poorly explained, ambiguous, out of date or
completely wrong, let us know. Even better, send us a fix incorrect, let us know. Even better, send us a fix
(Docbook is not difficult to learn, but there is no (Docbook is not difficult to learn, but there is no
objection to ASCII submissions).</para> objection to ASCII submissions).</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
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<para>Help translate FreeBSD documentation into your native <para>Help translate FreeBSD documentation into your native
language. If documentation already exists for your language. If documentation already exists for your
language, you can help translate additional documents or language, you can help translate additional documents or
verify that the translations are up-to-date. First take a verify that the translations are up-to-date and correct.
look at the <link xlink:href="&url.books.fdp-primer;/translations.html">Translations First take a look at the <link
xlink:href="&url.books.fdp-primer;/translations.html">Translations
FAQ</link> in the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer. FAQ</link> in the FreeBSD Documentation Project Primer.
You are not committing yourself to translating every You are not committing yourself to translating every
single FreeBSD document by doing this &mdash; as a single FreeBSD document by doing this &mdash; as a
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even regularly). It can be very satisfying to share your even regularly). It can be very satisfying to share your
expertise and help people solve their problems; sometimes expertise and help people solve their problems; sometimes
you may even learn something new yourself! These forums you may even learn something new yourself! These forums
can also be a source of ideas for things to work can also be a source of ideas for things to improve upon.
on.</para> </para>
</listitem> </listitem>
</orderedlist> </orderedlist>
</sect2> </sect2>
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<sect2 xml:id="ongoing-programmer-tasks"> <sect2 xml:id="ongoing-programmer-tasks">
<title>Ongoing Programmer Tasks</title> <title>Ongoing Programmer Tasks</title>
<para>Most of the tasks listed here require either a <para>Most of the tasks listed here may require a
considerable investment of time, or an in-depth knowledge of considerable investment of time, an in-depth knowledge of
the FreeBSD kernel, or both. However, there are also many the FreeBSD kernel, or both. However, there are also many
useful tasks which are suitable for useful tasks which are suitable for
<quote>weekend hackers</quote>.</para> <quote>weekend hackers</quote>.</para>
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</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>Read the &a.bugs;. There might be a problem you can <para>Read the &a.bugs;. There may be a problem you can
comment constructively on or with patches you can test. comment constructively on or with patches you can test.
Or you could even try to fix one of the problems Or you could even try to fix one of the problems
yourself.</para> yourself.</para>
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site</link>.</para> site</link>.</para>
<para>More information about the FreeBSD Foundation can be <para>More information about the FreeBSD Foundation can be
found in <link xlink:href="https://people.FreeBSD.org/~jdp/foundation/announcement.html">The found in <link
xlink:href="https://people.FreeBSD.org/~jdp/foundation/announcement.html">The
FreeBSD Foundation -- an Introduction</link>. To contact FreeBSD Foundation -- an Introduction</link>. To contact
the Foundation by email, write to the Foundation by email, write to
<email>bod@FreeBSDFoundation.org</email>.</para> <email>bod@FreeBSDFoundation.org</email>.</para>