From e0df59612de46acbfbe02a28db656ad129144da5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Weinberger <adamw@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 15 Mar 2005 19:03:31 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Grammar/spelling nits.

---
 en/gnome/news.xml | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en/gnome/news.xml b/en/gnome/news.xml
index 817e4edeb7..5914110120 100644
--- a/en/gnome/news.xml
+++ b/en/gnome/news.xml
@@ -38,22 +38,22 @@ encoding="ISO-8859-1" ?>
 
           <p>GNOME 2.10.0 has been released, and merged into the
           FreeBSD ports tree. We even beat the 5.4-RELEASE ports
-          freeze! This new release is jammed packed with
+          freeze! This new release is jam-packed with
           <a
           href="http://www.gnome.org/start/2.10/notes/rnwhatsnew.html">
-          changes</a>
+          changes</a>,
 
-          including some
+          including some brand new
           <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html#q1">goodies</a>
 
-          now availalbe on FreeBSD. Be sure to checkout our
+          now available on FreeBSD. Be sure to check out our
           <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq210.html">upgrade FAQ</a>
 
           prior to jumping in. For those that do not want to spend time
           compiling, packages for i386 are almost done building on our
-          <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>
+          <a href="$base/gnome/docs/faq2.html#q21">Tinderbox</a>.
 
-          .</p>
+          </p>
         </event>
       </day>
 
@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@ encoding="ISO-8859-1" ?>
           over. Thanks to all the artists that submitted
           <a
           href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/">
-          entries</a>
+          entries</a>.
 
-          . Our
+          Our
           <a
           href="http://people.FreeBSD.org/~adamw/images/gnome_splashes/franz_klammer-2.png">
-          winner</a>
+          winning entry</a>
 
           was designed by Franz Klammer, and is the default GNOME 2.10
           splashscreen for FreeBSD. However, unlike previous release,