From e1ac948ad26b587a005ec2b9e8580e8f18d4b0ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Marc Fonvieille <blackend@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Sat, 30 Nov 2002 22:49:07 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Various fixes in Parallel Line IP section: - remove
 contractions - punctuation fixes - use of manual page entities and hostid
 tags

---
 .../handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml | 20 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
index 55160ed54d..177272f09b 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
@@ -6002,7 +6002,7 @@ server-program-arguments</programlisting>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para>connecting two computers with PLIP.</para>
+	<para>Connecting two computers with PLIP.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -6010,8 +6010,8 @@ server-program-arguments</programlisting>
       <title>Creating a Parallel Cable</title>
 
       <para>You can purchase a parallel cable at most computer supply
-        stores.  If you can't do that, or you just want to know how
-        it's done, here's how you make one out of a normal parallel
+        stores.  If you cannot do that, or you just want to know how
+        it is done, the following table shows how to make one out of a normal parallel
         printer cable.</para>
 
       <table>
@@ -6134,7 +6134,7 @@ BUSY</literallayout></entry>
 
       <para>Get a laplink cable.</para>
 
-      <para>Confirm that both computers have a kernel with lpt driver
+      <para>Confirm that both computers have a kernel with &man.lpt.4; driver
 	support.</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>dmesg | grep lp</userinput>
@@ -6145,14 +6145,14 @@ lp0: TCP/IP capable interface</screen>
       <para>Plug in the laplink cable into the parallel interface on
 	both computers.</para>
 
-      <para>Configure the network interface parameters for lp0 on both
+      <para>Configure the network interface parameters for <devicename>lp0</devicename> on both
 	sites as <username>root</username>.  For example, if you want connect
-	the host host1 with host2</para>
+	the host <hostid>host1</hostid> with <hostid>host2</hostid>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>                 host1 &lt;-----&gt; host2
 IP Address    10.0.0.1      10.0.0.2</programlisting>
 
-      <para>Configure the interface on host1 by doing:</para>
+      <para>Configure the interface on <hostid>host1</hostid> by doing:</para>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lp0 10.0.0.1 10.0.0.2</userinput></screen>
 
@@ -6165,16 +6165,16 @@ IP Address    10.0.0.1      10.0.0.2</programlisting>
         manual pages &man.lp.4; and &man.lpt.4; for more details.</para>
 
       <para>You should also add both hosts to
-	<filename>/etc/hosts</filename>.</para>
+	<filename>/etc/hosts</filename>:</para>
 
       <programlisting>127.0.0.1               localhost.my.domain localhost
 10.0.0.1                host1.my.domain host1
 10.0.0.2                host2.my.domain</programlisting>
 
       <para>To confirm the connection works, go to each host and ping
-	the other.  For example, on host1:</para>
+	the other.  For example, on <hostid>host1</hostid>:</para>
 
-          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lp</userinput>0
+          <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>ifconfig lp0</userinput>
 lp0: flags=8851&lt;UP,POINTOPOINT,RUNNING,SIMPLEX,MULTICAST&gt; mtu 1500
         inet 10.0.0.1 --&gt; 10.0.0.2 netmask 0xff000000
 &prompt.root; <userinput>netstat -r</userinput>