Improve the 'How often should I mirror' section: metion locking, remove some usage of 'you' and make more gender neutral.

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Brad Davis 2015-05-07 16:09:31 +00:00
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<sect2 xml:id="mirror-how-often">
<title>How often should I mirror?</title>
<para>
Every mirror should be updated on a regular
basis. You will certainly need some script
framework for it that will be called by
&man.cron.8;. Since nearly every admin
does this his own way, we cannot give
specific instructions. It could work
like this:
Every mirror should be updated at a minimum of once per day.
Certainly a script with locking to prevent multiple runs
happening at the same time will be needed to run from
&man.cron.8;. Since nearly every admin does this in their own
way, specific instructions cannot be provided. It could work
something like this:
</para>
<procedure>
<step>