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The FreeBSD Documentation Project The FreeBSD Documentation Project
$FreeBSD$ $FreeBSD$
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<chapter id="desktop"> <chapter id="desktop">
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<para>FreeBSD can run a wide variety of desktop applications, such <para>FreeBSD can run a wide variety of desktop applications, such
as browsers and word processors. Most of these are available as as browsers and word processors. Most of these are available as
packages or can be automatically built from the ports packages or can be automatically built from the ports
collection. Many new users expect to find this kind of collection. Many new users expect to find these kinds of
applications on their desktop. This chapter will show you how applications on their desktop. This chapter will show you how
to install some popular desktop applications effortlessly, to install some popular desktop applications effortlessly,
either from their packages or from the ports collection.</para> either from their packages or from the ports collection.</para>
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<para>The ports collection contains several versions of the <para>The ports collection contains several versions of the
Netscape browser. Since the native FreeBSD ones contain a Netscape browser. Since the native FreeBSD ones contain a
serious security bug, installing those is strongly serious security bug, installing them is strongly
discouraged. Instead, use a more recent Linux or DIGITAL UNIX discouraged. Instead, use a more recent Linux or DIGITAL UNIX
version.</para> version.</para>
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<sect1 id="desktop-productivity"> <sect1 id="desktop-productivity">
<title>Productivity</title> <title>Productivity</title>
<para>When it comes to productivity, new users often seek for a <para>When it comes to productivity, new users often look for a
good office suite or a friendly word processor. While some good office suite or a friendly word processor. While some
<link linkend="x11-wm">desktop environments</link> like <link linkend="x11-wm">desktop environments</link> like
<application>KDE</application> already provide an office suite, <application>KDE</application> already provide an office suite,
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<para>If you want a small FreeBSD PDF viewer, <para>If you want a small FreeBSD PDF viewer,
<application>Xpdf</application> is a light-weight and <application>Xpdf</application> is a light-weight and
efficient viewer. It requires very small resources and is efficient viewer. It requires very few resources and is
very stable. It uses the standard X fonts and does not very stable. It uses the standard X fonts and does not
require Motif or any other X toolkit.</para> require Motif or any other X toolkit.</para>