From e6591e0dd8861f43bfdc01b3b35fb784697c4148 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Gabor Pali Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 07:11:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] - Minor wording improvements for the ARM superpages report Submitted by: emaste, Zbyszek Bodek --- .../htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml | 13 +++++++------ 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml index 7ffffb7a6d..aeaed35aa0 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/news/status/report-2013-04-2013-06.xml @@ -658,11 +658,12 @@ -

The ARM architecture is more and more prevalent, not only in - the mobile and embedded space. Among the more interesting - industry trends emerging in the recent months, there has been - the concept of "ARM server". Some top-tier companies, e.g. - Dell and HP, have already started to develop such systems.

+

The ARM architecture is becoming more and more prevalent, with + increasing usage beyond the mobile and embedded space. Among + the more interesting industry trends emerging in the recent + months, there has been the concept of "ARM server". Some + top-tier companies, e.g. Dell and HP, have already started to + develop such systems.

Key to success of &os; in these new areas is dealing with the sophisticated features of the platform, for example adding @@ -696,7 +697,7 @@

This project is jointly sponsored by The &os; Foundation and - Semihalf sp.j.

+ Semihalf.