English syntax & writing-style nit: split a sentence that is too long in

shorter, easier to digest parts, fixing the syntax too.
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Giorgos Keramidas 2005-01-06 05:36:20 +00:00
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@ -1490,9 +1490,10 @@ permit port ttyd0</programlisting>
provide.</para>
<para>The added functionality of <acronym>TCP</acronym> Wrappers
should not be considered a replacement for a good firewall;
however, but should used in conjunction with a firewall and
other security configurations to add an extra layer of protection
should not be considered a replacement for a good firewall.
<acronym>TCP</acronym> Wrappers can be used in conjunction
with a firewall or other security enhancements though and
it can serve nicely as an extra layer of protection
for the system.</para>
<para>Since this is an extension to the configuration of