diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml index 507319b201..fc9892e921 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ a-h. A few of the partition labels have special uses. The a partition is used for the root partition (/). - Thus only your system disk (e.g, the disk you boot from) + Thus only your system disk (e.g., the disk you boot from) should have an a partition. The b partition is used for swap partitions, and you may have many disks with swap @@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ single file system by pressing C. When prompted if this will be a FS (file system) or swap, choose FS and type in a mount point - (e.g, /mnt). When adding a disk in + (e.g., /mnt). When adding a disk in post-install mode, sysinstall will not create entries in /etc/fstab for you, so the mount point you specify is not @@ -853,7 +853,7 @@ da0: 126MB (258048 512 byte sectors: 64H 32S/T 126C) Allowing untrusted users to mount arbitrary media, - e.g. by enabling vfs.usermount as + e.g., by enabling vfs.usermount as described below, should not be considered safe from a security point of view. Most file systems in &os; were not built to safeguard against malicious devices. @@ -1036,7 +1036,7 @@ umass0: detached - mkisofs + <application>mkisofs</application> The &man.mkisofs.8; program, which is part of the sysutils/cdrtools port, @@ -1123,7 +1123,7 @@ umass0: detached - burncd + <application>burncd</application> CDROMs burning @@ -1145,7 +1145,7 @@ umass0: detached - cdrecord + <application>cdrecord</application> If you do not have an ATAPI CD burner, you will have to use cdrecord to burn your CDs. @@ -1996,7 +1996,7 @@ cd0: Attempt to query device size failed: NOT READY, Medium not present - tray c Formatting - A floppy disk needs to be low-level formated before it + A floppy disk needs to be low-level formatted before it can be used. This is usually done by the vendor, but formatting is a good way to check media integrity. Although it is possible to force larger (or smaller) disk sizes, @@ -2043,7 +2043,7 @@ cd0: Attempt to query device size failed: NOT READY, Medium not present - tray c The File System - Now the floppy is ready to be high-level formated. This + Now the floppy is ready to be high-level formatted. This will place a new file system on it, which will let FreeBSD read and write to the disk. After creating the new file system, the disk label is destroyed, so if you want to @@ -2437,7 +2437,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready - Complete machine destruction (e.g. fire), including + Complete machine destruction (e.g., fire), including destruction of any on-site backups. @@ -2469,7 +2469,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready - Copies of whole filesystems and/or disks (e.g. periodic + Copies of whole filesystems and/or disks (e.g., periodic &man.rsync.1; of the whole machine). This is generally most useful in networks with unique requirements. For general protection against disk failure, it is usually inferior to @@ -2795,7 +2795,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready bsdlabel - First, print the bsdlabel from each of your disks (e.g. + First, print the bsdlabel from each of your disks (e.g., bsdlabel da0 | lpr), your file system table (/etc/fstab) and all boot messages, two copies of each. @@ -2869,7 +2869,7 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready newfs - Try to mount (e.g. + Try to mount (e.g., mount /dev/da0a /mnt) the root partition of your first disk. If the bsdlabel was damaged, use bsdlabel to re-partition and label the @@ -2878,8 +2878,8 @@ sa0(ncr1:4:0): Logical unit is in process of becoming ready Re-mount the root partition of the disk read-write (mount -u -o rw /mnt). Use your backup program and backup tapes to recover the data for this file - system (e.g. restore vrf /dev/sa0). - Unmount the file system (e.g. + system (e.g., restore vrf /dev/sa0). + Unmount the file system (e.g., umount /mnt). Repeat for each file system that was damaged. @@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ Filesystem 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity Mounted on &prompt.root; mksnap_ffs /var /var/snapshot/snap - One can find snapshot files on a file system (e.g. + One can find snapshot files on a file system (e.g., /var) by using the &man.find.1; command: @@ -3874,7 +3874,7 @@ gbde_lockdir="/etc/gbde" - Allows the use of two independent keys (e.g. a + Allows the use of two independent keys (e.g., a key and a company key). @@ -3974,7 +3974,7 @@ Reenter new passphrase: - Attaching the Provider with the generated Key + Attaching the Provider with the Generated Key &prompt.root; geli attach -k /root/da2.key /dev/da2 Enter passphrase: @@ -3987,7 +3987,7 @@ Enter passphrase: - Creating the new File System + Creating the New File System &prompt.root; dd if=/dev/random of=/dev/da2.eli bs=1m &prompt.root; newfs /dev/da2.eli @@ -4085,11 +4085,11 @@ geli_da2_flags="-p -k /root/da2.key" systems. - Why should Swap be Encrypted? + Why Should Swap be Encrypted? Like the encryption of disk partitions, encryption of swap space is done to protect sensitive information. Imagine an - application that e.g. deals with passwords. As long as these + application that e.g., deals with passwords. As long as these passwords stay in physical memory, all is well. However, if the operating system starts swapping out memory pages to free space for other applications, the passwords may be written to @@ -4158,7 +4158,7 @@ geli_da2_flags="-p -k /root/da2.key" - Verifying that it Works + Verifying That it Works Once the system has been rebooted, proper operation of the encrypted swap can be verified using the @@ -4484,7 +4484,7 @@ Device 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity /dev/ad6 of the same size for HAST operation. The HAST pool (sometimes also referred to as a - resource, i.e. the GEOM provider in + resource, i.e., the GEOM provider in /dev/hast/) will be called test. @@ -4511,7 +4511,7 @@ Device 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity It is also possible to use host names in the remote statements. In such a case, make - sure that these hosts are resolvable, e.g. they are defined + sure that these hosts are resolvable, e.g., they are defined in the /etc/hosts file, or alternatively in the local DNS. @@ -4526,7 +4526,7 @@ Device 1K-blocks Used Avail Capacity It is not possible to use GEOM - providers with an existing file system (i.e. convert an + providers with an existing file system (i.e., convert an existing storage to HAST-managed pool), because this procedure needs to store some metadata onto the provider and there will not be enough required space @@ -4657,7 +4657,7 @@ notify 30 { &prompt.root; /etc/rc.d/devd restart When the carp0 interface goes - up or down (i.e. the interface state changes), the system + up or down (i.e., the interface state changes), the system generates a notification, allowing the &man.devd.8; subsystem to run an arbitrary script, in this case /usr/local/sbin/carp-hast-switch. This