From ee0fa2683e9b6c8d8dfa1be33de1bcde01ed668f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Glen Barber Date: Tue, 21 Feb 2012 03:59:33 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Add commas after 'e.g.' Fix a grammar nit: s/test/testing/ Found with: textproc/igor --- .../books/developers-handbook/testing/chapter.sgml | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/testing/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/testing/chapter.sgml index fd1a7245f0..52743ae7f6 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/testing/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/testing/chapter.sgml @@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ - Run in single user mode. E.g. &man.cron.8;, and + Run in single user mode. E.g., &man.cron.8;, and other daemons only add noise. The &man.sshd.8; daemon can - also cause problems. If ssh access is required during test + also cause problems. If ssh access is required during testing either disable the SSHv1 key regeneration, or kill the parent sshd daemon during the tests. @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ Try to keep the temperature as stable as possible around the machine. This affects both quartz crystals and disk drive algorithms. To get real stable clock, consider - stabilized clock injection. E.g. get a OCXO + PLL, inject + stabilized clock injection. E.g., get a OCXO + PLL, inject output into clock circuits instead of motherboard xtal. Contact &a.phk; for more information about this.