From ef86b8b41e77001ada2d878d304c8b6eb9a7afb2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jeroen Ruigrok van der Werven Date: Tue, 9 Oct 2001 10:45:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Correct sentences to be more grammatical correct. --- en/news/2001/news.xml | 10 +++++----- en/news/news.xml | 10 +++++----- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/en/news/2001/news.xml b/en/news/2001/news.xml index 925efad89f..4397a6506e 100644 --- a/en/news/2001/news.xml +++ b/en/news/2001/news.xml @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ - $FreeBSD: www/en/news/news.xml,v 1.23 2001/10/07 03:20:20 kuriyama Exp $ + $FreeBSD: www/en/news/news.xml,v 1.24 2001/10/08 14:10:43 phantom Exp $ @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ FreeBSD/ppc port now boots and executes kernel

Benno Rice has committed - mega-patch which added support for OpenFirmware to the FreeBSD + a mega-patch which added support for OpenFirmware to the FreeBSD loader. The loader can now load a kernel over the network and execute it on an Apple iMac.

 @@ -46,10 +46,10 @@ FreeBSD/ia64 port now boots on real hardware -

After few months of development +

After a few months of development Doug Rabson and Peter - Wemm have committed patches which are extending FreeBSD/ia64 - port's functionality and adding possibility to boot on real + Wemm have committed patches which extends the FreeBSD/ia64 + port's functionality and adds the possibility to boot on real hardware.

 diff --git a/en/news/news.xml b/en/news/news.xml index 925efad89f..4397a6506e 100644 --- a/en/news/news.xml +++ b/en/news/news.xml @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ - $FreeBSD: www/en/news/news.xml,v 1.23 2001/10/07 03:20:20 kuriyama Exp $ + $FreeBSD: www/en/news/news.xml,v 1.24 2001/10/08 14:10:43 phantom Exp $ @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ FreeBSD/ppc port now boots and executes kernel

Benno Rice has committed - mega-patch which added support for OpenFirmware to the FreeBSD + a mega-patch which added support for OpenFirmware to the FreeBSD loader. The loader can now load a kernel over the network and execute it on an Apple iMac.

 @@ -46,10 +46,10 @@ FreeBSD/ia64 port now boots on real hardware -

After few months of development +

After a few months of development Doug Rabson and Peter - Wemm have committed patches which are extending FreeBSD/ia64 - port's functionality and adding possibility to boot on real + Wemm have committed patches which extends the FreeBSD/ia64 + port's functionality and adds the possibility to boot on real hardware.