From f7414992a180d5afd4d818076b325ef4a2ff8d02 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Mon, 15 Jul 2002 05:15:10 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] . Use more intuitive names for describing the secondary MX
 and primary   MX hosts at the dialup PPP mail server part. . Remove an
 explicit reference to -bd 15m and rc.conf for secondary MX   since they are
 too FreeBSD specific and will very often be untrue   (especially if the
 secondary MX is not a FreeBSD machine).

PR:		docs/39757
Submitted by:	Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
---
 .../books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml          | 32 +++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
index 78c6e6fa6c..b56465ef38 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mail/chapter.sgml
@@ -800,36 +800,34 @@ to /etc/mail/sendmail.cf.</programlisting>
           
 	<indexterm><primary>UUCP</primary></indexterm>      
 
-	<para>There are at least two ways to do this, an alternative
-	  being UUCP.</para>
+	<para>There are at least two ways to do this.  One way is to use
+	  UUCP.</para>
       
-	<para>The key is to get a Internet site to provide secondary MX
-	  service for your domain.  For example:</para>
+	<para>Another way is to get a full-time Internet server to provide secondary MX
+	  services for your domain.  For example:</para>
 
-	<programlisting>bigco.com.            MX        10      bigco.com.
-                      MX        20      smalliap.com.</programlisting>
+	<programlisting>myco.com.            MX        10      myco.com.
+                      MX        20      myisp.com.</programlisting>
           
 	<para>Only one host should be specified as the final recipient
-	  (add <literal>Cw bigco.com</literal> in
-	  <filename>/etc/mail/sendmail.cf</filename> on <hostid role="domainname">bigco.com</hostid>).</para>
+	  (add <literal>Cw myco.com</literal> in
+	  <filename>/etc/mail/sendmail.cf</filename> on <hostid role="domainname">myco.com</hostid>).</para>
           
 	<para>When the sending <command>sendmail</command> is trying to
-	  deliver the mail it will try to connect to you over the modem
+	  deliver the mail it will try to connect to you (<hostid role="domainname">myco.com</hostid>) over the modem
 	  link.  It will most likely time out because you are not online.
-	  <command>sendmail</command> will automatically deliver it to the
-	  secondary MX site, i.e. your Internet provider.  The secondary MX
-	  site will try every
-	  (<literal>sendmail_flags = -bd -q15m</literal> in
-	  <filename>/etc/rc.conf</filename>) 15 minutes to connect to
-	  your host to deliver the mail to the primary MX site.</para>
+	  <application>Sendmail</application> will automatically deliver it to the
+	  secondary MX site, i.e. your Internet provider (<hostid role="domainname">myisp.com</hostid>).  The secondary MX
+	  site will then periodically try to connect to
+	  your host and deliver the mail to the primary MX host (<hostid role="domainname">myco.com</hostid>).</para>
           
 	<para>You might want to use something like this as a login
 	  script.</para>
 
 	<programlisting>#!/bin/sh
-# Put me in /usr/local/bin/pppbigco
+# Put me in /usr/local/bin/pppmyisp
 ( sleep 60 ; /usr/sbin/sendmail -q ) &amp;
-/usr/sbin/ppp -direct pppbigco</programlisting>
+/usr/sbin/ppp -direct pppmyisp</programlisting>
 
 	<para>If you are going to create a separate login script for a
 	  user you could use <command>sendmail -qRbigco.com</command>