Grammatical corrections.

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Ceri Davies 2004-09-30 17:12:19 +00:00
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@ -2396,10 +2396,10 @@ device_probe_and_attach: cbb0 attach returned 12</screen>
without the consent of the OS. Secondly, the APM logic is
embedded in the BIOS, and it operates outside the scope of the
OS. This means users can only fix problems in their APM BIOS by
flashing a new one into the ROM; which, is a very dangerous
procedure, and if it fails, it could leave the system in an
flashing a new one into the ROM; which is a very dangerous
procedure, and if it fails, could leave the system in an
unrecoverable state. Thirdly, APM is a vendor-specific
technology, which, means that there is a lot of parity
technology, which means that there is a lot of parity
(duplication of efforts) and bugs found in one vendor's BIOS,
may not be solved in others. Last but not the least, the APM
BIOS did not have enough room to implement a sophisticated power