From fae6ddd41b423dc6a84e535b3b463d56c1efc512 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 2 Dec 2014 11:26:58 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Remove redundant markup and words in a sentence. Provide
 proper capitalization in title tags.

Obtained from:	igor(8) output
---
 en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
index 3d3441f73f..86060dcfee 100644
--- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
+++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.xml
@@ -1604,8 +1604,8 @@ scsibus1:
       <para>Instead, one can use <command>dump</command> and
 	<command>restore</command> in a more secure fashion over an
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.  This example creates a
-	full, compressed backup of the <filename>/usr</filename> file
-	system and sends the backup file to the specified host over a
+	full, compressed backup of <filename>/usr</filename> and sends
+	the backup file to the specified host over a
 	<acronym>SSH</acronym> connection.</para>
 
       <example>
@@ -1656,7 +1656,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	same directory that is being backed up.</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>tar</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar czvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable> . </userinput></screen>
@@ -1670,7 +1670,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	backup to restore.</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Restoring Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Restoring Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>tar</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>tar xzvf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.tgz</replaceable></userinput></screen>
@@ -1728,7 +1728,7 @@ scsibus1:
 	examples would be:</para>
 
       <example>
-	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory With
+	<title>Backing Up the Current Directory with
 	  <command>pax</command></title>
 
       <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>pax -wf <replaceable>/tmp/mybackup.pax</replaceable> .</userinput></screen>