From fd2f40489a4570d9d4aa1d462891aea125a5f834 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Murray Stokely Date: Thu, 31 Jul 2003 02:43:01 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] * Combine a one sentence paragraph with the proceeding paragraph with which it clearly belongs. * Update an example 'Pentium III -> Pentium IV' * Note that some packages are provided as .tbz files. * Clarify a sentence. * Fix a grammar mistake. --- en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml | 12 +++++------- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml index b4bf656324..c310d2dbf6 100644 --- a/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml +++ b/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml @@ -98,9 +98,7 @@ documentation. A downloaded package file can be manipulated with FreeBSD package management commands, such as &man.pkg.add.1;, &man.pkg.delete.1;, &man.pkg.info.1;, and so - on. - - Installing a new application can be carried out with a single + on. Installing a new application can be carried out with a single command. A FreeBSD port for an application is a collection of files @@ -167,7 +165,7 @@ because they have to run on the maximum number of systems. By installing from the port, you can tweak the compilation options to (for example) generate code that is specific to a Pentium - III or Athlon processor. + IV or Athlon processor. @@ -347,7 +345,7 @@ local: lsof-4.56.4.tgz remote: lsof-4.56.4.tgz version of the application. Package files are distributed in .tgz - format. You can find them at .tbz formats. You can find them at , or on the FreeBSD CD-ROM distribution. Every CD on the FreeBSD 4-CD set (and the PowerPak, etc.) contains packages @@ -731,7 +729,7 @@ R-deps: Now that you have found a port you would like to install, you are ready to do the actual installation. The port - includes instructions on how to build source code, but not the + includes instructions on how to build source code, but does not include the actual source code. You can get the source code from a CD-ROM or from the Internet. Source code is distributed in whatever manner the software author desires. Frequently this is a @@ -1079,7 +1077,7 @@ Receiving lsof_4.57D.freebsd.tar.gz (439860 bytes): 100% Keeping your ports up to date can be a tedious job. For instance, to upgrade a port you would go to the ports directory, build the port, deinstall the old port, install the - new port, and then cleaning up after the build. Imagine doing + new port, and then clean up after the build. Imagine doing that for five ports, tedious right? This was a large problem for system administrators to deal with, and now we have utilities which do this for us. For instance the