- Add URLs for RFCs [1]
- Instead of pointing www.sun.com, use the right URLs to
playground.sun.com
- Remove Ipv6.org the site is unreachable since weeks
Submitted by: Asenchi <asenchi@asenchi.com> [1]
I hardly used acronym tags in that section:
linguistics.arizona.edu/~hharley/PDFs/HarleyAcronyms2003.pdf
is a good explanation of what is and what is not an acronym.
Submitted by: harti
In Wireless section:
- Use of replaceable, literal, and command tags where needed
- Use of note tags instead of "Note:"
- Some little rewordings
- Use of lowercase for some role attributes
- Punctuation fixes
- Use of hostid tags and manual page entities where needed
- s/IP Masquerading (NAT)/network address translation (NAT)/ which is
more consistent with all our docs and the applications names
- Some tags fixes
- IPFIREWALL_DEFAULT_TO_ACCEPT is not anymore an undocumented option, so
fix a comment
In ISDN section:
- expand "sync/TA" --> synchronous card/TA
- s/I/We
- s/page/section/
- Some punctuation and case fixes
- Remove an useless ironic comment about Windows 95 in the ascii art
version of a diagram.
Also expand some contractions of the same, discovered while I was
hunting down all of the above.
This commit can very likely be ignored by translation teams, as I doubt
that this problem transcends languages.
- Avoid a manual page entity in a title
- Avoid to start a sentence with a manual page entity (use of "The .Nm
program" scheme instead)
- A punctuation fix.
- Add missing option, literal tags
- Use of programlisting tags instead of <para><option></option></para>
which is ugly and wrap lines when the browser size is not "correct"
- s/--/—
- Tag and capitalize properly hostnames
- Remove useless tags
- A little rewording for consistency.
an unnecessary colon.
o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most
important one. Remove some confusing text from a sentence.
- Use trademark entities.
- Add trademark attributions.
- Always use correct case for trademarks.
- Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
- Don't use trademarks as nouns (e.g. don't use "Windows NT's").
diskless-x/article.sgml:
- While I'm here anyway add trademark tags for all trademarks, now
that the stylesheet handles it right.
trademark.ent:
- Add entities for more trademarks / companies.
Also rename the 3Com trademark entity from t3com to tm.3com. This
should make the entity naming convention a bit more consitent. This is
done now since the entity is not used too many places yet.
o Consistently use hostid elements when referring to domain names
o Reword the explanation of the root zone [1]
PR: docs/41449 [1]
Submitted by: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com> [1]
