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Jim Mock
18ae08af60 Add NETGRAPH_ETHER to the list in the PPPoE section.
Submitted by:	caitlen <caitlen888@yahoo.com>
2001-08-10 21:28:59 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
a801119d91 Fix typo: s/bought/brought/
PR:		docs/29605
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-10 16:18:59 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
a959f24ce5 Remove the copy of the Supported Hardware list (which is release- and
architecture-specific) from the Installing FreeBSD chapter of the
Handbook.  Point readers to the hardware notes for the version of
FreeBSD that they have.

Approved by:	nik
2001-08-10 16:01:35 +00:00
Murray Stokely
91bb5c5671 Add missing words to make complete sentences.
Clarify the descriptions of the different mount options.
Clean up a couple of man page references.
2001-08-10 01:18:34 +00:00
Murray Stokely
126c118090 *smack* ;)
You can't put a <varname> inside a <filename>.
2001-08-10 01:06:45 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c393928208 Add a basic colophon. We should add to this information about the
history of this document, more about the open source tools we use to
build the different presentation formats, etc.
2001-08-10 00:30:44 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
8cc2fd88ac Added subsection about AMD to the NFS section.
Submitted by:	Wylie Stilwell <wylie@beerho.com>
Approved by:	murray
2001-08-10 00:14:55 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
6cf123d6cf Closed a couple of open tags which were not closed.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 22:50:10 +00:00
Randy Pratt
d32a5a740e Added myself to the developers section.
Reviewed by:	Murray
2001-08-09 19:14:32 +00:00
Murray Stokely
65866a630b Split the CDROM publishers section into 3 subsections (retail bundles,
CD-sets, and distributors).

* Add CompUSA, Frys, and Micro Center to retail bundles.
* Add Ingram Micro and Navarre to distributors.
* Remove WindRiver from the distributors section for now, since Ingram
  Micro and Navarre handle that.  Pending a better address than "The
  relevant department at WRS", I will add WRS back to the list.

Submitted by:	Theresa Elam <theresa.elam@windriver.com>
2001-08-09 18:50:33 +00:00
Randy Pratt
1a1fb4eea8 Reviewed by: Murray 2001-08-09 18:41:30 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
bf35604b33 Fill paragraph. 2001-08-09 07:32:12 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
51f64a7286 Mention dummynet(4) in the question about bandwidth managers.
PR:		29547
Submitted by:	shill@free.fr
2001-08-09 07:30:36 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4aefe9c65b Move the minimal-sh question down to the end of the chapter. The real
reason for the move is that what is now the second question (about
libc.so.3) refers to "the previous" question, and it means question
one, not the minimal-sh one.  I moved it to the end since it didn't
seem to fit anywhere else.

PR:		29547
Noticed by:	shill@free.fr
2001-08-09 07:28:00 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
11f46b8e37 Fill paragraphs. 2001-08-09 07:21:45 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
d11f41b8c5 Mark up some things in <filename>. 2001-08-09 07:20:16 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
c08692afc3 Correct assorted spelling, grammar, and typographical errors.
PR:		29547
Submitted by:	shill@free.fr
2001-08-09 07:19:11 +00:00
Murray Stokely
193538c0a9 kerneldebug/ was repo-copied to the Developer's Handbook
The contents of staff/ was moved into a separate article.
Update the Makefile appropriately.
2001-08-08 19:23:56 +00:00
Chern Lee
a7231a08d6 Make use of <port> tag over <filename> for port references. If
<filename type="port">, or similar, is decided upon at a later time, it would
not be too hard to change.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-08 18:49:16 +00:00
Chern Lee
46b6b8fe06 * procces -> process
* Link text of redundant "Send HUP to inetd" back to previous example

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-08 18:44:56 +00:00
Murray Stokely
7e14cb00aa Doh! Unbreak Handbook build after last night's late-night commit. I
reogranized the serial chapter but forgot to checkin this file which
updates one of the references to that chapter.

Yelled at by: Chris Shumway, Valentino Vaschetto
2001-08-08 18:08:31 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
ce3a4f2ccb Note that copyright doesn't have anything to do with names (those are
trademarks), and improve the text a little.

PR:		29501
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
2001-08-08 17:35:54 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
2c9bba1bb1 Add Gary W. Swearingen for his numerous PRs, most with patches. 2001-08-08 17:33:04 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
83ea11e809 Fill paragraph after previous commit. No content changes. 2001-08-08 17:29:39 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
4a030b5f34 GPL is the General Public License, not the GNU Public License.
PR:		29502
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
2001-08-08 17:28:42 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
11b5e6ee37 with in -> within
PR:		29508
Submitted by:	Gary W. Swearingen <swear@aa.net>
2001-08-08 17:27:03 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
01216a93a1 minnie.cs.adfa.edu.au -> minnie.tuhs.org
Submitted by:	Robert Dingman <rdingman@sentex.net>
2001-08-08 17:17:20 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2a14ff14f4 - Add an <example> and use a calloutlist for the /etc/ttys section
instead of creating a new subsection for each field.  The output is
  much more succinct and legible.
- Add a note about FreeBSD 5.0 and devfs that obviates the 'Making
  Device Special Files' section.
- Remove reference to a book that we don't have any bibliographical
  information for and that is a bit tangential to the subject at hand
  (RS-232 Bible).
- Add missing words to make complete sentences.
- Simplify discussion of null-modem and "straight" serial cables.
- Consistently use a replaceable 'N' for the last character of
  terminal devices instead of interspersing ? and X.
- Remove duplicate 'See the sio(4) manual page for more information.'
  lines.  One of these is quite sufficient per section.
- Remove more duplicate information that is unnecessary since this
  chapter has been reorganized.
- Enclose a hint in the <tip> tag.

This chapter still needs work.
2001-08-08 06:42:18 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
1165f1629b Added makefile and toplevel sgml file neccessary to build complete
bibliography.

Approved by:    murray
Kickstarted by: nik
2001-08-08 02:25:55 +00:00
Chern Lee
be2032ed93 Add section about configuring inetd.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-07 23:58:38 +00:00
Chern Lee
8fbe832483 Spelling Fixes:
* sybolic -> symbolic
* donatations -> donations
* foundatation -> foundation
* remaining e-mail -> email

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 22:59:24 +00:00
Chern Lee
8821260cc9 Reworded sections of "Reasons to run a name server" and changed
definition of "Origin" in DNS section.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 22:50:16 +00:00
Murray Stokely
65edfaeafc Update links to the Handbook Contributors chapter and Staff appendix
to point to the new Contributors List article instead.
2001-08-06 22:43:27 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
49dd86fb16 Added myself to the developers section, and removed myself from
additional contributors.

Approved by:	murray
2001-08-06 22:27:46 +00:00
Chern Lee
c20dd61362 Spelling Changes:
* OSs -> Operating Systems
* commmunications -> communications
* realise -> realize
* customising -> customizing
* customise -> customize
* realise -> realize
* behaviour -> behavior

British to American spelling for some of the above words only in the
Handbook as discussed on -doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 21:25:28 +00:00
Murray Stokely
31d095639c Remove Greg Lehey's X11 section. It has served us well.
There are some gaps in the content now but those will be filled in
shortly.  As far as I can tell, this was the last part of the Handbook
where the copyright was held by an individual author.  I wonder if
people like iUniverse.com contacted Greg before publishing the
Handbook.

While I'm here add a standard synposis and mark up some attributions
in <sectNinfo>.

Partially submitted by: nik (posting on -doc)
2001-08-06 20:48:21 +00:00
Chern Lee
2ed036cc7c Structural Markup Changes to DNS:
* Terminology -> <informaltable>
* File list -> <informaltable>
* Record Types -> <variablelist>
* Links -> <itemizedlist>

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 20:25:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
565a2b3a46 This chapter was a very unnatural union of several good tutorials.
Many of the sections in this chapter contained duplicate information
(about FreeBSD 1.1.5.1, mind you).

This commit adds a more substantial introduction section with
information about terminology, cables and ports, kernel configuration
of serial devices, and using stty for serial configuration.  The
remaining sections ("terminals", "dial-in service", "dial-out
service", and "setting up a serial console") can then refer to this
earlier section instead of duplicating how to setup /etc/ttys and HUP
init, etc. in each one.

Also contains a couple more markup fixes for <keycode>s.

PR:		19481
2001-08-06 12:36:16 +00:00
Johann Visagie
1cd9e31902 Change port maintainer Tony Maher's email address (again) to sync with his
ports and with reality.
2001-08-06 12:27:12 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2237f3e894 First step of a major overhaul of this chapter. Split into multiple
commits to make it slightly easier on the translation teams.

  * Add a standard synopsis
  * Remove references to FreeBSD 1.1.5.1 and FreeBSD 1.1.  Document
    the behavior of 4.x / 5.x and ignore the paleontology.
  * Move <indexterm>s around so that printed output looks better.
  * Reference other chapters in the Handbook instead of duplicating
    information.
  * Rephrase many sentences to be more concise.
  * <filename> -> <command>
  * Refer to the text as "this chapter" instead of "this document"
  * Refer to manual pages consistently.
  * Turns a couple of question and answer entries into more formal
    paragraphs.
  * Don't intersperse example commands inside paragraphs as often.
    Instead, talk about something and then provide an example.
  * Mark up contributors in <sectNinfo>.
  * Remove synopsis-like information from one of the individual
    sections, since this has been expanded at the front of the
    chapter.
  * Mark up keys in <keycode>
  * Remove acknowledgments section.  This is inappropriate for a book
    chapter and the acknowledged person has been moved to the
    <sectNinfo> as an additional contributor.
  * Remove "information integrated from FAQ", that describes much of
    our documentation.
  * Remove troubleshooting entry about needing to be in a specific
    group to run tip or cu, since this is no longer the case.

PR:		19481
2001-08-06 12:17:47 +00:00
Dirk Froemberg
c6814089c7 The port sysutils/cdrecord was renamed to sysutils/cdrtools. 2001-08-05 21:26:50 +00:00
John Polstra
5cec0e3ada Add information about the FreeBSD Foundation. 2001-08-05 20:56:34 +00:00
Jim Mock
c5af921456 Fix the link to the Wind River web site. While I'm here, update the
mailing address, etc., for Wind River.

Submitted by:	Chris Dempsey <chris@luckyirish.net> on -doc
2001-08-05 19:29:44 +00:00
Jim Mock
99a71ecd7b More grammatical and typo fixes. While I'm here, add a few notes to
various parts to make things more clear to the reader.

Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> on -doc
2001-08-05 19:25:16 +00:00
Jim Mock
df1201d01a Whitespace changes only -- translators can ignore this commit.
Since the word list is in the doc project primer, it should follow the
style that's talked about throughout the primer :-)
2001-08-05 18:59:48 +00:00
Jim Mock
f264b96d44 Add "email" to the word list.
Submitted by:	murray
2001-08-05 18:54:51 +00:00
Jim Mock
30b5bdb705 Add Microsoft and Sony Japan to the list of companies using FreeBSD.
Re-add Hotmail while I'm here as well.

Submitted by:	nik, murray, alfred
2001-08-05 18:51:11 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
c58dd58b3c s/Concurrent Version System/Concurrent Versions System/; 2001-08-05 11:45:01 +00:00
Alfred Perlstein
d1c8009f67 fix links to my pxe configuration.
Submitted by: Andrew Boothman <andrew@cream.org>
2001-08-05 01:01:23 +00:00