: The article "Java and Jakarta Tomcat on FreeBSD" is a bit stale. It
: contains stale download instructions for the JDK 1.3.1 SDK. The
: language seems overly casual to me. In addition, there are some
: typos and various minor English nits in the article.
PR: docs/72500
Submitted by: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
informaltable element properly, unless the pgwide attribute is
explicitly set to 1. Use this consistently within the (en) tree, and
update the FDP accordingly. This should finally silence the demons in:
PR: docs/73095
Submitted by: Hilko Meyer <Hilko dot Meyer at gmx dot de>
Currently we have articles.ent and books.ent, and
for example, articles.ent can be used by putting the
following lines in the doctype declaration:
<!ENTITY % articles.ent PUBLIC
"-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook FreeBSD Articles Entity Set//EN">
%articles.ent;
This pulls all of the necessary entities via share/sgml/articles.ent.
The translation teams can customize these entities by redefining
the articles.ent file in <langcode>/share/sgml. See
ja_JP.eucJP/share/sgml for example.
. Use better visible name for Using CVSup section
. Use 1.3.1-patchset9 as referencing patchset
. Use linux-sun-jdk1.3.1's build 10 for references.
. Use tomcat 4.0.6 for references
. Do not mention hand handling dependencies for gtar, bzip2, etc.
These are handled automatically these days.
XXX: article need to be updated to cover least following things:
. enable linux emulation via kernel module loading
. notice possiblities to build jdk13 without plugin, etc. This
is useful in server only environment.
. it should mention jdk14 as one of choices
- Use trademark entities
- Add trademark attributions.
- Always use correct case for trademarks.
- Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
trademark.ent:
- Add entities for more trademarks / companies.
- Sort the Sun trademark attribution entity.
enable it in en_US.ISO8859-1/ and ja_JP.eucJP/.
- Add PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook Language Specific Entities//EN"
and l10n.ent for entity localization.
- Use share/misc/docbook.css for indentiation of <programlisting>
and <screen>.
- Add some missing $FreeBSD$.
translators can ignore them.
In the future, please use tabs for 8 spaces and two spaces after a
period. This should be in the FDP Primer if it's not already (it's
been beaten to death on -doc a few times over the years).
