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Author SHA1 Message Date
Marc Fonvieille
38656c8856 s/GBDE/gbde/ in one title to be consistent with the rest of the chapter.
While I'm there one SGML tag fix.
2003-06-08 17:33:13 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
65ce835490 - Add a missing period.
- While I'm there some s/disklabel/disk label/ in the floppy section.
2003-06-08 16:33:40 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
bbdb2f6675 Add missing username tags. 2003-06-08 14:03:42 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
af8f572396 Add missing username tags. 2003-06-07 18:16:37 +00:00
Chern Lee
d7e984062c British English -> American English:
recognise -> recognize

Typos/Spelling Mistakes:
occured -> occurred
utilites -> utilities
enscrambled -> scrambled

Misc:
timezone -> time zone
linux -> Linux
interconvert -> convert
swapspace -> swap space
2003-06-03 22:09:46 +00:00
Christian Brueffer
d7ae14ee63 Replace a broken link
PR:             52500
Submitted by:   Julien Gabel <jg@thilelli.net>
2003-05-25 20:18:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
01f0956493 Add a section about ATAPI/CAM. 2003-05-24 07:51:10 +00:00
Ceri Davies
b0f91074a0 Minor grammatical improvement. 2003-05-22 15:04:47 +00:00
Ceri Davies
8a78d205d6 Spelling and grammar fixups. 2003-05-22 00:00:19 +00:00
Martin Heinen
a0293ec921 Clean up some index entries:
- capitalize IP and FORTRAN,
- move entries in singular to the corresponding plural entries,
- fix AT&T index entry,
- move composite entries into the primary index entry and
  add a secondary entry when necessary,
- move indexterm elements in the proper section.
2003-05-21 21:25:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6b82935c26 Grammar fix. 2003-05-21 20:10:27 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1d0d461a53 In indexterms s/ISO-9660/ISO 9660/ to be consistent with the text and
real ISO name (see http://www.iso.org/)
2003-05-21 19:52:28 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
faca532dd0 Reword "syslog/dmesg" to something more user-friendly. 2003-05-20 19:37:36 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
b28e47038e Start producing output in the form of <chapter name><section id>.html.
Not objected to by:	-doc
Reviewed by:		ceri, hrs, brueffer
2003-05-20 14:45:34 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b55c832494 - Use manual page entities for ccd(4).
- Some little "rewordings" and tags fixes.
2003-05-11 17:24:30 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6e06ed35ef On 5.X systems device ccd must be used instead of pseudo-device ccd for
4.X.  While I'm there some little sgml fixes.
2003-05-10 11:15:57 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0ea1c1562b Typo s/ulitmately/ultimately/ 2003-05-08 21:27:16 +00:00
Hiten Pandya
476187f0a9 Use 'irrelevant' instead of 'moot'.
Approved by: des (mentor)
2003-05-05 19:36:10 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
57df57c420 Move 's out from application tags and some punctuation fixes. 2003-05-04 21:14:45 +00:00
Murray Stokely
0d2e08017f Normalize indexterms.
Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-05-04 12:18:24 +00:00
Murray Stokely
03c7c73250 Add indexterms relating to software RAID.
Trim authorgroup.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-05-04 11:31:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
771e009df1 * Clarify / Remove first person exposition and personal anecdotes.
PR:		docs/50664
2003-05-04 11:00:06 +00:00
Murray Stokely
90ff2cb926 More work on the new GBDE section:
* Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink.
* Simplify run-on sentence in introduction.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS
  and UFS2. (1)
* Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote.
* Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1).
* Wordsmith (1, partially)

PR:		docs/51598
(1) Submitted by:	bmah
2003-05-04 09:58:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d0033cfa5d Improve recently committed GDBE section.
* Capitalize section titles.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Improve a few references.
* Improve a few sentences.

PR:		docs/51598
Submitted by:	bmah (mostly)
2003-05-04 09:10:25 +00:00
Murray Stokely
13a1a04980 The floppy disk section was previously 4.x-centric, written in a very
informal style, and full of grammatical errors.  Improve this
situation somewhat.

Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net> (mostly)
PR:		docs/50761
2003-05-04 07:23:00 +00:00
Ceri Davies
ab1f23b8b8 The drives supported by burncd(8) is now at http://www.freebsd.dk/ata/;
update the link.

Submitted by:		Ed Watts <hwatts@earthlink.net>
Patch submitted by:	Simon L. Nielsen <simon@nitro.dk>
2003-05-03 13:46:03 +00:00
Christian Brueffer
563857d969 Correct grammar 2003-05-01 08:15:47 +00:00
Robert Watson
96d1510553 Big Momma Whitespace Cleanup for the Disks chapter:
(1) Trim trailing whitespace (existing text, gbde text)
(2) Line-breaks at 72 characters or so (gbde text)
(3) Clean up whitespace around <screen></screen (gbde text)

No content changes for translators.

Pointed at by:	bmah
2003-04-30 18:30:50 +00:00
Robert Watson
e98c63375f Commit FreeBSD Handbook chapter on using gbde in FreeBSD 5.0 or
higher (higher recommended).  This excellent chapter was contributed
by Lucky Green.  There appears to be a formatting problem involving
obfuscating the $FreeBSD$ in the template sample that should be
resolved by someone with a bit more SGML clue than me.

Submitted by:   Lucky Green <shamrock@cypherpunks.to>
Reviewed by:    phk
2003-04-30 15:19:41 +00:00
Giorgos Keramidas
fb73b104ec The track number in audio cdroms has two digits and is filled with
zeros if it's less than 10.  Make sure we get the device names right
in the audio CD-ROM copying instructions.

PR:		48545
Submitted by:	Grzegorz Czaplinski <G.Czaplinski@prioris.mini.pw.edu.pl>
2003-03-26 02:11:55 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8e74dc9c6c Punctuation fix. 2003-03-10 22:34:57 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b314f5854e Add some application tags. 2003-03-05 22:21:20 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d53c45fb90 Fix a typo: s/and/an 2003-03-05 21:57:16 +00:00
Martin Heinen
4ce0adae40 Use <errorname> for error messages. 2003-02-03 23:34:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3ea53e44e2 Use of some manual pages entities. 2003-01-26 21:13:32 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7b1775b35a Indentation/whitespaces fix (can be ignored). 2003-01-26 18:50:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7331f8a7b4 Put a sentence at the right place (I forgot it in my previous commit). 2003-01-26 18:45:24 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
306a463607 Use an "itemizedlist" where needed. 2003-01-26 18:17:54 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
adda0b7b36 Use application tags for SAMS:Alexandria. 2003-01-26 17:54:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0d2004d397 - Use of username tags for root.
- Remove "e.g." from a command line.
2003-01-26 13:04:43 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
151cdfe2c1 Use quote tags where needed. While I'm there: addition of some
non-breaking spaces.
2003-01-26 12:51:14 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fde93a40e1 In quota section:
- Use of manual page entities
- Some tags fixing.
2003-01-19 15:17:33 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
c6178000e6 Various typos fixing (can be safely ignored by translating teams for
the moment).

Submitted by:	Hiten Pandya <hiten@unixdaemons.com>
2003-01-12 21:42:05 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
3b56da1a63 Add a note about matcd(4) removal. 2003-01-10 18:33:25 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
74bdfab555 Reword a sentence. 2002-12-26 21:24:09 +00:00
Martin Heinen
a0047a1f71 Add missing </entry> tags. 2002-12-15 16:51:52 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
49f9e04e61 Run a few chapters through aspell. 2002-12-13 20:30:43 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
9bc35c2e21 Update the synopsis to include file system snapshots. 2002-12-10 06:03:09 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
faecbf6717 Add a note about using the -L flag with dump(8) and snapshots
Discussed with:	rwatson
2002-12-10 05:16:14 +00:00
Tom Rhodes
258dab636b All of the known dump(8) issues are fixed, remove the warning about them.
Discussed with:	mckusick
Prodded by:	rwatson
2002-12-10 05:01:27 +00:00