Alex Dupre
50bdcb4b88
Reorganize and enhance the diskless section (especially for PXE and 5.X).
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Mainly inspired by
PR: docs/62834
Submitted by: Jean-Francois Dockes <dockes@wanadoo.fr>
Approved by: blackend (mentor)
2004-03-12 19:51:51 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
369b9c6a51
Punctuation fixes.
2004-03-06 21:22:53 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
4c2889b644
One s/network/-net/ I forgot in my previous commit.
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In Wireless section:
- Use of replaceable, literal, and command tags where needed
- Use of note tags instead of "Note:"
- Some little rewordings
- Use of lowercase for some role attributes
- Punctuation fixes
2004-03-05 20:13:02 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
c74e61edc6
s/network/-net/ in static routes command lines.
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Well I don't know how I missed it when I committed this part :((
Submitted by: Edoardo Martelli <edoardo.martelli@cern.ch>
2004-03-04 17:40:59 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fa42aa27b2
- Various little rewordings
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- Add some replaceable tags where needed
2004-03-01 18:34:11 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
6caf0b0bf7
s/the/this/ where needed.
2004-02-29 17:24:51 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8b1845eb9e
A rewording: s/encrypt wireless data over a network./encrypt data over a
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wireless network./
2004-02-28 12:42:16 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
e5417cbf82
Add a section about static route configuration (this addition contains
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an ASCII art diagram, I'll add a graphic version ASAP).
PR: docs/63310
Submitted by: Al Hoang <hoanga@mac.com>
2004-02-26 20:28:51 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
23fe617b54
Add informations on how to use a configuration file with natd(8).
2004-02-20 18:44:19 +00:00
Ceri Davies
75ebfbbb4f
Replace an emphasis element with acronym, and remove another extraneous
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one.
Discussed on: -doc
2004-02-15 13:42:57 +00:00
Ceri Davies
c24372e981
s/does not seem to work any more/is no longer supported/
2004-02-11 19:28:25 +00:00
Ceri Davies
a41df9e8d8
Correct the syntax in an example /etc/bootptab entry.
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Submitted by: Rob
Message-ID: <402624E2.8010607@users.sourceforge.net>
2004-02-11 19:25:46 +00:00
Alex Dupre
c5a313bd14
Add a coma between bridged network interfaces.
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PR: docs/61979
Submitted by: Alex Wilkinson <alex.wilkinson@dsto.defence.gov.au>
Approved by: blackend (mentor)
2004-02-01 00:13:20 +00:00
Ceri Davies
f569b64369
Whitespace cleanup from r1.267. Translators may ignore this commit.
2004-01-18 21:25:09 +00:00
Ceri Davies
7dc593972a
Chase the split of the net/isc-dhcp3 port.
2004-01-18 20:52:42 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
18e46c1599
RFC2373 has been obsoleted by RFC3513, so refer to the new RFC in the
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IPv6 section.
Submitted by: Matthew Seaman <m.seaman@infracaninophile.co.uk>
PR: docs/61168
2004-01-10 13:12:42 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0c34299d2c
s/man page/manual page/ and add a manual page entity.
2004-01-09 20:01:09 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b38d7a8865
Show how to define a default route via /etc/rc.conf and using route(8).
2004-01-09 16:47:13 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
289af3514f
Use of &gated; entity and application tags for GateD.
2004-01-09 15:09:01 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
bd9c789a56
Remove duplicated word.
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Submitted by: pav
2004-01-09 08:44:38 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d2dbec227f
A section talks about forwarding packets between 2 interfaces but does
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not tell where to find info on how to do it, so let's point the reader
to the right section.
2004-01-07 21:13:57 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
ac82c94bf9
Use hostid tags instead of literal ones.
2004-01-05 17:56:44 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
9eeaf5fdbb
Add back the net-routing.pic since it builds fine now (the ps-->eps
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conversion is fixed).
2003-12-31 11:22:35 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
69715fffd4
Remove the net-routing.pic image from the build for the moment.
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It's a quick-dirty hack to fix the build.
2003-12-30 14:47:30 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b8b1c2a6b3
Replace ASCII art for a routing example with .pic diagram.
2003-12-30 09:54:54 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
b1daff9508
Add correct bridge(4) mibs for 5.2-RELEASE and later
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Reported by: Matt Smith <matt@xtaz.net>
2003-12-28 17:00:29 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8c6ab39821
In Bridging section:
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- Use of hostid tags and manual page entities where needed
- s/IP Masquerading (NAT)/network address translation (NAT)/ which is
more consistent with all our docs and the applications names
- Some tags fixes
- IPFIREWALL_DEFAULT_TO_ACCEPT is not anymore an undocumented option, so
fix a comment
In ISDN section:
- expand "sync/TA" --> synchronous card/TA
- s/I/We
- s/page/section/
- Some punctuation and case fixes
- Remove an useless ironic comment about Windows 95 in the ascii art
version of a diagram.
2003-12-28 14:50:38 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d5123c90e2
In ISDN section:
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- add a manual page entity where needed
- some punctuation and case fixes
- s/iijPPP/userland PPP/ which is less confusing for the reader.
2003-12-18 17:17:51 +00:00
Daniel Harris
d69b8f85a5
Update ISDN link.
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PR: 60048
Submitted by: FURUKAWA Jumpei <bell@f-bell.net>
2003-12-09 05:10:06 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
dc937d3bbd
Fix link to etherboot documentation.
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PR: docs/59914
Submitted by: FURUKAWA Jumpei <bell@f-bell.net>
2003-12-03 10:02:07 +00:00
Ceri Davies
9b7a21de42
Correct some misuses of "its" and "it's".
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Also expand some contractions of the same, discovered while I was
hunting down all of the above.
This commit can very likely be ignored by translation teams, as I doubt
that this problem transcends languages.
2003-11-23 17:52:12 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
5681e64f0d
In NTP section:
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- Avoid a manual page entity in a title
- Avoid to start a sentence with a manual page entity (use of "The .Nm
program" scheme instead)
- A punctuation fix.
2003-11-22 09:08:52 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
7a663f8b03
In NTP section:
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- Add a note for 5.X specific rc.conf options (the text was for 4.X)
- Tags fixes.
2003-11-21 21:55:07 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
efa65110f5
In NAT section:
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- Add missing option, literal tags
- Use of programlisting tags instead of <para><option></option></para>
which is ugly and wrap lines when the browser size is not "correct"
- s/--/—
- Tag and capitalize properly hostnames
- Remove useless tags
- A little rewording for consistency.
2003-11-19 18:20:12 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
cb109c7ea3
- Use of application tags for a daemon
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- Add missing hostid tags
- Fix a broken link to Mozilla port
2003-11-16 07:59:19 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
23dfd1710b
Update the PLIP section:
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- Add info about the need of an interrupt driven port
- Update for 5.X
- Use an example of connection between a 4.X and a 5.X boxes.
2003-11-15 20:05:08 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
69927433f3
Add missing hostid tags.
2003-11-15 17:53:39 +00:00
Maksim Yevmenkin
82efac4ad3
Add Bluetooth chapter for the FreeBSD handbook
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Submitted by: Pav Lucistnik <pav@oook.cz>
Reviewed by: imp, hmp
Approved by: imp (mentor)
2003-11-11 03:02:28 +00:00
Ceri Davies
f589c4e5a5
Grammar police: "setup" is not a verb.
2003-11-05 10:36:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d0187c0c11
Fix dhcpd related manual page entities.
2003-09-20 08:37:27 +00:00
Ceri Davies
311250560d
o Change one usage of "i.e." to "e.g." where it makes more sense, and remove
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an unnecessary colon.
o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most
important one. Remove some confusing text from a sentence.
2003-09-07 14:49:26 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
0064207a88
handbook/*
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- Use trademark entities.
- Add trademark attributions.
- Always use correct case for trademarks.
- Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
- Don't use trademarks as nouns (e.g. don't use "Windows NT's").
diskless-x/article.sgml:
- While I'm here anyway add trademark tags for all trademarks, now
that the stylesheet handles it right.
trademark.ent:
- Add entities for more trademarks / companies.
Also rename the 3Com trademark entity from t3com to tm.3com. This
should make the entity naming convention a bit more consitent. This is
done now since the entity is not used too many places yet.
2003-08-28 16:30:39 +00:00
Ceri Davies
d7097e796c
o Uppercase entries in the DNS glossary
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o Consistently use hostid elements when referring to domain names
o Reword the explanation of the root zone [1]
PR: docs/41449 [1]
Submitted by: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com> [1]
2003-08-26 23:07:04 +00:00
Ceri Davies
e24c105a4a
Whitespace commit; translators should ignore.
2003-08-26 22:40:02 +00:00
Ceri Davies
d4983d81b8
Add a note that users of 4.9-RELEASE will not need to build their own
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statically linked copy of named-xfer if they want to run named in a
chrooted environment, and can simply copy the one from /usr/libexec.
2003-08-26 22:34:56 +00:00
Ceri Davies
2b90e90e5a
Add a period to the end of a sentence.
2003-08-26 22:18:54 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
dccaf30235
Add and fix some closing para tags.
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PR: docs/55987
Submitted by: Denis Peplin <info@volginfo.ru>
2003-08-26 07:19:28 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
f4d334c487
Point the user to pccardc(8) and pccardd(8) manual pages in case of
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trouble with wireless PC Card devices.
PR: docs/52183
Submitted by: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com>
2003-07-21 13:35:50 +00:00
Ceri Davies
39c0b7d5e4
Markup applications and commands with title elements.
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Discussed with: murray
2003-07-13 17:37:31 +00:00
Ceri Davies
509bdbe10e
Capitalise titles as per the Chicago Manual of Style.
2003-07-13 17:32:32 +00:00