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Simon L. B. Nielsen
541f5ec33d o Split the FreeBSD Developers Handbook into two books:
- FreeBSD Architecture Handbook, which is a book about the FreeBSD
    architecture.  The SMP article have also been moved into the new
    arch handbook as a separate chapter.

  - FreeBSD Developers Handbook, which is a book about developing on
    FreeBSD; basically what was left when the architecture parts was
    moved away.

o Hook up the new FreeBSD Architecture Handbook to the build.

o Remove the SMP article since it is now part of the FreeBSD
  Architecture Handbook.

The relevant files from the FreeBSD Developers Handbook have been
repository copied to the new FreeBSD Architecture Handbook.

This is just step one in the split, both books need some work to be
real seperate books.  E.g. the FreeBSD Architecture Handbook still
needs an introduction.

Repository copy by:	joe
Requested by:		rwatson
Approved by:		murray, ceri (mentor)
2003-08-06 23:48:04 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
0e6609dbf4 Remove references to branches/ section of FTP site.
PR:		docs/54738
Submitted by:	Ken Smith <kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU>
2003-08-06 01:30:25 +00:00
Peter Pentchev
1f09eb866c Fix the troff filter designation.
PR:		55289
Submitted by:	NAKAMURA Takeshi <1yen@sh.rim.or.jp>
2003-08-05 17:26:09 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
c81d2a7387 Update to WWW Mirror List.
PR:		docs/55002
Submitted by:	Ken Smith <kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU>
2003-08-05 03:28:00 +00:00
Murray Stokely
b69caa6a7a * Remove/reword first person sentences.
* Acknowledge Windows Media Player and Apple QuickTime trademarks on
  first use.
* Remove several ridiculous sentences ("Most of the above is true.")
* Other grammar fixes.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-08-03 22:28:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
60376f36ea * Multiple grammar fixes.
* Reword first person sentences.
* Add missing words.
* Remove duplicate words.
* "Do this.." -> "type this .."

The video section of this chapter still needs a LOT of work.

Sponsored by:	  FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-08-03 21:45:29 +00:00
Alexander Kabaev
ffd81ae538 Add an entry for GCC 3.3.1-pre upgrade.
Requsted by:	kris
Reminded by:	fenner (Bill "annoying reminder guy" Fenner)
2003-08-03 16:07:59 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
557ae65507 Add some guimenuitem tags and a missing word. 2003-08-03 13:37:12 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8f4d17056b s/fips/FIPS/ according to http://www.igd.fhg.de/~aschaefe/fips/. 2003-08-03 09:35:09 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1dc4e14672 - s/ipfw(8)/&man.ipfw.8;
- Some s/IPSec/IPsec I missed in my previous check.
I will fix some other things in that section (VPN over IPsec) in future
commits.
2003-08-03 09:07:29 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
ebeccc039d - Use quote tags instead of " or '
- Use emphasis tags for *blah* words
- s/IPSec/IPsec/
- Add filename, option and command tags where needed.
2003-08-03 08:57:09 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
93168f8ae1 s/Partition Magic/PartitionMagic and add &reg; according to
http://www.powerquest.com/legal/.
2003-08-02 20:33:56 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
f51e2cbe1f Use of quote tags instead of "". 2003-08-02 17:49:37 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d143484db0 Add application tags for sendmail, and fix some tagging for fetchmail. 2003-08-02 12:31:57 +00:00
Murray Stokely
762346438a Wrap long lines. Translators kindly ignore. Whitespace only change. 2003-08-01 19:57:56 +00:00
Murray Stokely
75da6e399b * Its -> It's
* Remove a 3.X era tip.
* add missing words to clarify a sentence.
* Clarify softupdates description.
* Remove newline/whitespace from inside <literal> tags.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-08-01 19:47:16 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
4cb64c7c3f rc.order(8) is a C program, not a script.
Approved by:	ceri (mentor)
2003-07-31 11:26:43 +00:00
Murray Stokely
aab92a3b6c * Acknowledge Java and Macromedia Flash trademarks.
* Add a <colspec> so that table columns are spaced more efficiently.
* Be more precise : 'things' -> 'add-ons'.
2003-07-31 05:54:50 +00:00
Murray Stokely
fd2f40489a * Combine a one sentence paragraph with the proceeding paragraph with
which it clearly belongs.
* Update an example 'Pentium III -> Pentium IV'
* Note that some packages are provided as .tbz files.
* Clarify a sentence.
* Fix a grammar mistake.
2003-07-31 02:43:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e30f0850e4 Use <replaceable> rather than <literal> so that example filenames are
rendered more appropriately with slanted text rather than just
monospace text.
2003-07-31 02:32:15 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e06bad48b3 Add the 'frame="none"' attribute to the only table in this chapter
without it.  Tables are rendered better with our current docbook
stylesheets if they omit the frames around each cell.
2003-07-31 02:23:14 +00:00
Murray Stokely
9521538be2 * Spell 'referred' properly.
* Fix singular/plural agreement of a sentence.
* Switch transposed words in a sentence "most with" -> "with most".

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-07-31 02:14:17 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
921c8ebf7c "Wraplines" commit (can be ignored by translators). 2003-07-30 13:49:47 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
0659dc6b4f Add a footnote about default length of the password under FreeBSD. 2003-07-30 13:40:34 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
f6f85d0974 - Back out my previous commit, I was wrong [1]
- Add manual page entities for opiekey(1) and opiepasswd(1).

Pointy Hat:	[1]
2003-07-30 12:22:48 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
71132e6a47 Remove the word "secret" for S/Key and OPIE passwords which is
confusing with the convention used in that section.
2003-07-30 12:11:32 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
cf253eac90 - s/NOTE/Note
- Add some manual page entities
- s/id/ID to be consistent will all docs
- Use right tags for a Kerberos realm
- Reword a sentence
- Add some username tags and a missing )
2003-07-30 09:57:31 +00:00
Daniel Harris
94b6141648 Add oracle UID.
PR:		54742
Submitted by:	skv
Reviewed by:	blackend
2003-07-28 07:30:59 +00:00
Murray Stokely
1c12a8a36a Fix comma usage. 2003-07-28 05:58:10 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d715bff3c9 * Add a missing word.
* Make an example more relevant by multiplying hard disk sizes by 10.
* Add 'or DVD' to a CDROM reference.

Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-07-28 04:57:56 +00:00
Murray Stokely
c19cae311e * X Inside changed it's name to Xi Graphics 6 years ago. Update the
text and add a link to the website.

* Add information about the 5.0 and 5.1 releases of FreeBSD in the
  History section.  Include some information from the early adopter
  guide and the release announcements to set the right expectation for
  these releases versus the 4.X releases.  Note that when 5.X is
  declared STABLE, work will progress on 6.0-CURRENT.
2003-07-27 22:26:15 +00:00
Murray Stokely
daaf7e934f Add UltraSparc to the list of platforms that FreeBSD supports. Note
that both the Alpha and UltraSparc ports are 64-bit.
2003-07-27 21:55:26 +00:00
Murray Stokely
308f7a6a10 * Add a non-breaking space in 'Pentium Pro'.
* SPARC64 -> UltraSparc
* Add <trademark> around Pentium, Alpha, UltraSparc, etc.. in the
  introduction of the Handbook.
2003-07-27 21:45:01 +00:00
Murray Stokely
acb5f0b7cd Instead of enumerating all of the 4.X releases here (it was only up to
FreeBSD 4.4), list only the date of 4.0-RELEASE and &rel2.current
(released in &rel2.current.date;).  Also note that additional 4.X
releases will be expected throughout 2003.
2003-07-27 21:30:23 +00:00
Hideyuki KURASHINA
e76faa169f The command to finish the editing of elements attributes is C-c C-c.
Submitted by:	Oliver Fischer <plexus@snafu.de>
PR:		docs/54896
2003-07-27 19:31:47 +00:00
Murray Stokely
0b1f1db15c Add a role attribute to the <sect2info> for Jordan's first person
account in the introduction chapter.  The author attribution for this
section should be rendered more prominently (or at least differently),
since a first person narration follows.

Obtained from:	FreeBSD Handbook, 2nd Printed Edition
Sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc. / WRS
2003-07-26 06:25:14 +00:00
Hideyuki KURASHINA
673b0e73df Add missing end-tags.
Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net>
PR:		docs/54870
2003-07-25 21:29:14 +00:00
Hideyuki KURASHINA
3e58e351e2 Correct to use close tag (</para>).
Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net>
PR:		docs/54869
2003-07-25 21:12:35 +00:00
Hideyuki KURASHINA
e43017f9ba Add missing end-tags.
Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net>
PR:		docs/54868
2003-07-25 21:07:42 +00:00
Hideyuki KURASHINA
477e834cff Correct to use close tag (</para>) in section SIGIO.
Submitted by:	Martin Karlsson <mk-freebsd@bredband.net>
PR:		docs/54865
2003-07-25 20:23:26 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1a51e27eb4 - For daemons names application tags should be used.
- Add some manual page entities.
2003-07-24 21:30:06 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
d8d9665153 Punctuation and tags fixes. 2003-07-23 20:45:49 +00:00
Simon L. B. Nielsen
d6004bd479 Add my PGP key so it is actually included in the handbook.
Approved by:	ceri (mentor)
2003-07-23 13:15:19 +00:00
Kirill Ponomarev
d9040dbaa5 Add my PGP Key
Approved by:	fjoe (mentor) (implicit)
2003-07-22 20:06:23 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
1be9d6b899 Replace quotes with the right tags. 2003-07-22 19:47:08 +00:00
Chern Lee
672feb205a Remove the old IPsec section and bring in the new, more detailed and
comprehensible section.

Written by:	nik and hmp
SGML'ization sponsored by:	FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
2003-07-22 08:29:26 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
8246040365 Add a line about xf86cfg -textmode, which is a way to use xf86cfg(1)
under console.
2003-07-22 08:16:11 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
9ea1167331 Add a note about xf86cfg(1), a graphical configuration tool for XFree86
4.X.

PR:		docs/54677
Submitted by:	Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
2003-07-21 20:37:36 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
fbb6139bcd Note the vanilla XFree86 port/package installs the complete X
distribution, and separate packages/ports are available for various
components.

PR:		docs/54676
Submitted by:	Josef El-Rayes <j.el-rayes@daemon.li>
2003-07-21 20:00:10 +00:00
Marc Fonvieille
f4d334c487 Point the user to pccardc(8) and pccardd(8) manual pages in case of
trouble with wireless PC Card devices.

PR:		docs/52183
Submitted by:	Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com>
2003-07-21 13:35:50 +00:00