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Tom Hukins
cc853292bc Replace erroneous occurences of "the the" with "the" throughout the docs
PR:		28086
Submitted by:	Félix-Antoine Paradis <reel@sympatico.ca>
2001-06-13 11:37:03 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
d15224bb59 Correct assorted spelling and grammar errors.
PR:		27882
Submitted by:	Eric S. Van Gyzen <esv@vangyzen.net>
2001-06-05 01:37:15 +00:00
Sheldon Hearn
47cbf9754a Replace old-style "chown foo.bar" with orthodox "chown foo:bar".
Reported by:	dcs
2001-05-28 13:41:59 +00:00
Murray Stokely
f868320eb8 Remind users that they must kill -HUP the mountd process after making
changes to /etc/exports.

Suggested by: Bernd Salbrechter <salb@hell.gud.siemens.at>
2001-05-11 09:25:31 +00:00
Murray Stokely
74d2891767 Add section on running named in a sandbox.
PR:		docs/27024
Submitted by:	mikem <mike_makonnen@yahoo.com>
Reviewed by:	Chern Lee <chern@osd.bsdi.com>
2001-05-09 01:14:29 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
a0415e82f0 Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).  Stuff inside
<question> tags in the mini-faq's and clearly-attributed blocks was
left alone.
2001-04-17 01:37:48 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d56db00760 Add section on setting up a DNS server in the Advanced Networking Chapter.
Submitted by:	Chern Lee <chern@osd.bsdi.com>
2001-04-14 00:58:57 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
caa6994914 DocBook police: open and close tags for <programlisting> should cuddle
up to the contents within.

Approved by:	nik
2001-04-09 00:33:58 +00:00
Daniel Harris
2865db4f4d Typo: appreciate -> appropriate.
Submitted by:	"Jamyn" <jshanley@wt.net> on -doc
2001-02-09 16:02:02 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
5543c25d08 Explain that portmap is needed in order for an NFS server to work.
PR:		24382
Submitted by:	Willem van Engen <wvengen@stack.nl>
2001-01-16 21:38:07 +00:00
Jim Mock
6b86823ee6 Fix some spelling errors and some other minor nits. 2000-12-15 21:52:35 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
30aaf2fe1b Fix some of the indentation which needed changing after the previous commit.
This is a white-space only change; translators may ignore it.
2000-09-19 17:06:59 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
ed2dcfcb23 Extend the bit about using DHCP so that it mentions that BPF is
required in the kernel for DHCP to work.

PR:		21399
Submitted by:	Dan Pelleg <dpelleg+bsd@cs.cmu.edu>,
		Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
2000-09-19 17:05:47 +00:00
Alexander Langer
9530ef3ecf Big part about NIS Netgroups: What they are and why they are useful,
along with realtime examples as in the other parts.

Submitted by:	Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de>
Reviewed by:	Neil Bliss <yoda@integratus.com> and myself
2000-09-01 21:31:46 +00:00
Alexander Langer
8171c7589b Big overhaul of the NIS tutorial, e.g. add examples how to exclude
users (and more changes).

The original patch was
Submitted by:		Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
PR:			18926
but I received a big
Comment email by:	Udo Erdelhoff <ue@nathan.ruhr.de>
where he addressed many nits in Eric's changes and/or suggested how to
rewrite parts in a correct/better way and gave me some further content.

Eric's patches removed some of Bill Swingle's old work.  I decided
to keep these but to merge Eric's changes into the existing content.

The result is a very fine NIS tutorial, which is supposed to be extended
by NIS Netgroups content written by Udo Erdelhoff soon (at least he
promised that :-])
2000-08-18 15:20:35 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
ae4c2b5ba2 option BRIDGE -> options BRIDGE in kernel config.
PR:		20030
Submitted by:	Sam Wun <swun@esec.com.au>
2000-07-19 13:14:15 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4f20439b93 Add a section about using FreeBSD as a bridge.
PR:		docs/19105
Submitted by:	Steve Peterson <steve@zpfe.com>
2000-06-19 13:29:01 +00:00
Jim Mock
aca13e8771 Attack of the spelling police. The grammar police were also occasionally
called onto the scene.
2000-06-13 18:05:39 +00:00
Jim Mock
3302fdee27 Change &ldquo;...&rdquo; to <quote>...</quote> as per a discussion on
-doc.

Suggested by:	nik
2000-06-08 01:56:23 +00:00
Bill Swingle
4463ff344b Fixed tiny but glaring error in NFS chapter.
Thanks to Dan Langille for pointing this out.
2000-05-02 22:40:41 +00:00
Gregory Sutter
0a03117c28 Properly capitalize section title within DHCP section. 2000-04-06 20:43:06 +00:00
Bill Swingle
81f23a6b67 Forgot to add the "written by" line to the NFS chapter I wrote. 2000-04-04 22:19:31 +00:00
Bill Swingle
65eae5960e Added Greg's newly written dhcp chapter to the advanced networking
section.

Submitted by:	gsutter
Reviewed by:	jim
2000-04-03 08:59:57 +00:00
Jim Mock
9643b8636e Restructure some of this chapter and add more to the NFS section.
Submitted by:	unfurl
2000-03-30 23:55:50 +00:00
Bill Swingle
2e19fd0719 This section of the NIS chapter failed to explain that these lines
needed to be added to root's crontab. I fixed a few other wording issues
as well.

Reviewed by:	jim
2000-02-13 21:14:23 +00:00
Jim Mock
f316998fd4 Add section on NIS/YP
Submitted by:	unfurl
2000-01-24 21:24:28 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
f32942094a Use &a.majordomo;. 2000-01-06 02:39:25 +00:00
Chris Costello
7cfb0ff20b Rid blank lines of whitespace.
(Translation teams:  You can ignore this commit.)
1999-11-07 01:54:56 +00:00
Peter Wemm
5ff728b8ca $Id$ -> $FreeBSD$ 1999-09-06 06:53:43 +00:00
Chris Costello
e5ebbaedba Cosmetic: <ulink URL=...' -> <ulink url=...' according to the doc proj
primer.
1999-08-24 13:20:40 +00:00
Nik Clayton
122d319794 "../handbook.sgml" -> "../book.sgml" in Emacs local variables section. 1999-08-23 21:24:10 +00:00
Nik Clayton
838f8740b9 Any variant on "freebsd.org" (all cases) mapped to "FreeBSD.org".
PR:             docs/12842
Submitted by:   Chris Costello <chris@calldei.com>
1999-07-28 20:23:32 +00:00
Bill Fumerola
05d191f662 freebsd.org -> FreeBSD.org, which seems to be the domain name of choice.
FreeBSD, Inc. now owes me a new keyboard as I've seemed to have worn out
my "shift" and "`" key from sending vi so many "~"s. :->
1999-06-20 21:19:40 +00:00
Nik Clayton
10b0b0a21e Add SGML comments at the top of the files with the $Id$ string. Remove
most of the other spurious comments.

Two comments relating to copyright have *not* been merged in from the
LinuxDoc version yet -- I've contacted the original authors to ask if
they would be willing to assign the copyright to the project. When I
get their response the copyright comments will either be merged in, or
left out, as necessary.
1999-03-08 22:04:49 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1e28ab5a96 Huge whitespace changes. Translators can ignore this commit completely.
Rationale: All the changes to the DocBook handbook so far have been
careful to keep whitespace changes to a minimum. This is so the
translators have as easy a job as possible in identifying exactly what's
changed.

This has meant the English version has become more and more 'ugly'. Lines
indented by the wrong amount, some lines longer than 130 characters,
others shorter than 20, gaps of 3 or 4 lines between paragraphs (and
sometimes within paragraphs). This makes it difficult to follow the
structure of the document, and needlessly complicates fixing SGML
problems.

It also makes the source practically useless as a teaching aid; the
more baroque the source looks, the less likely people are to dive in and
contribute.

This commit fixes all that -- and boy was it tedious. The snag is, it's
touched almost every line in every file in the Handbook.

Technically, the changes were made by running (in Emacs)
sgml-indent-or-tab (bound to the TAB key) on almost each line (except
those in <programlisting>, <screen>, <literallayout>, and other
verbatim sections), and then running sgml-fill-element (bound to
C-c C-q) on most paragraphs.

FWIW, this is the first, only, and last change of this type contemplated.
1999-03-07 21:26:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
62a7d13816 Created a new set of entities for manual pages.
The construct:

    <citerefentry>
      <refentrytitle>foobar</refentrytitle>
      <manvolnum>1</manvolnum>
    </citerefentry>

is a pain to type, and messes up the pretty-printing of the source code.
Replace every occurence of a entry like that with:

    &man.foobar.1;

Adjusting the manual page name and section number appropriately.

The definitions for these entities are stored in man-refs.ent. This
file is in doc/share/sgml because it is not just specific to the Handbook.
I expect the DocBook'd FAQ and Tutorials (coming RSN) to use them as
well.

A new PUBLIC identifier has been created for these entities, and added to
the catalog file.
1999-03-07 16:32:22 +00:00
Nik Clayton
fe79ecbe4d Revert one of my previous changes. Sentences now have two spaces after
the period. Apologies for the repository bloat. This is entirely a
whitespace change.
1999-03-04 22:42:55 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7321b94099 Suddenly realised none of the
<informalexample>
    <screen>
      ...
    </screen>
  </informalexample>

need the <informalexample> element. So remove it. Simple search and
replace does the trick.
1999-01-30 23:35:05 +00:00
Nik Clayton
9fc2fa5197 * Added boothelp.sgml
* Merged in changes between tags LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK and
  LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK_2. The merges are as follows (if a file isn't listed
  here it's because there are no changes to merge since the
  LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK tag was put down).

  File                 From  ->  To      Merged to files...
  ---------------------------------------------------------------
  authors.sgml         1.118 ->  1.128   authors.ent
  boothelp.sgml        Added
  contrib.sgml         1.312 ->  1.329   staff/chapter.sgml
  eresources.sgml      1.50  ->  1.51    eresources/chapter.sgml
  handbook.sgml        1.91  ->  1.95    handbook.sgml
  mirrors.sgml         1.92  ->  1.99    mirrors/chapter.sgml
  porting.sgml         1.112 ->  1.118   [1]
  ports.sgml           1.31  ->  1.33    ports/chapter.sgml
  printing.sgml        1.22  ->  1.23    printing/chapter.sgml
  stable.sgml          1.17  ->  1.18    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml [2]
  submitters.sgml      1.246 ->  1.261   contrib/chapter.sgml

  [1] Merged changes. Part of these changes are the migration of the
      "Making a port" section from contrib/chapter.sgml to
      ports/chapter.sgml

  [2] Merged some changes. 1.18 demotes some of the section headings so
      that the -stable section will appear on one HTML page. This is not
      the case with the DocBook stylesheets we're using, so wasn't
      necessary. For the time being, the -stable headings will follow
      the -current headings. This can be revisited after the migration
      is complete.

  There will be one more merge pass once the Handbook in doc/handbook/ is
  frozen, and then a pass to reformat (refill) most of the lines in the
  Handbook so it's more aesthetically pleasing. The SGML parsers don't
  care, but it makes it easier to follow the structure when editing the
  documents.

* Removed

      sgml-shorttag: nil
      sgml-minimize-attributes: max

  from the Emacs local variables at the bottom of each file. It didn't
  do quite what I was expecting.
1998-12-10 20:44:09 +00:00
Nik Clayton
276c9344d5 Merged in the following changes. This was done by taking diffs between the
tags LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK_START and LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK from doc/handbook/.

Note that the LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK tag is not necessarily at the HEAD of
the file. So some files won't show changes because changes were applied
after I laid down the LINUXDOC_2_DOCBOOK tag.

Not everything was merged. In some cases, URLs had been shortened;

    http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/

becomes

     ../docproj/

This is a mistake, since users browsing the Handbook on their own machine
can't be expected to have links like this work. Of course, for mirrors,
they'll end up pointing back to the main site. For the mean time, do
nothing -- this will need an entity defined to reference the base URL
of the FreeBSD site, individual mirrors can set this as necessary.

Notice how some files (on the left) are merged to the same file (on
the right). This is because the new Handbook file structure is organised
on DocBook chapter lines.

Files with no revision number in the "From" column didn't exist when I
started the conversion.

File                 From  ->  To      Merged to files...
---------------------------------------------------------------
anoncvs.sgml               ->  1.1     cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
authors.sgml         1.93  ->  1.118   authors.ent
backups.sgml               ->  1.4     backups/chapter.sgml
bibliography.sgml    1.33  ->  1.37    bibliography/chapter.sgml
contrib.sgml         1.274 ->  1.312   staff/chapter.sgml
ctm.sgml             1.22  ->  1.23    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
cvsup.sgml           1.36  ->  1.40    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
disks.sgml                 ->  1.3     disks/chapter.sgml
eresources.sgml      1.39  ->  1.50    eresources/chapter.sgml
firewalls.sgml       1.19  ->  1.20    security/chapter.sgml
handbook.sgml        1.83  ->  1.91    handbook.sgml
history.sgml         1.24  ->  1.25    introduction/chapter.sgml
install.sgml         1.65  ->  1.67    install/chapter.sgml
isdn.sgml            1.12  ->  1.15    advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
kerberos.sgml        1.12  ->  1.13    security/chapter.sgml
kernelconfig.sgml    1.31  ->  1.32    kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
kerneldebug.sgml     1.17  ->  1.19    kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
linuxemu.sgml        1.22  ->  1.24    linuxemu/chapter.sgml
memoryuse.sgml       1.11  ->  1.12    internals/chapter.sgml
mirrors.sgml         1.80  ->  1.92    mirrors/chapter.sgml
nutshell.sgml        1.14  ->  1.15    introduction/chapter.sgml
pgpkeys.sgml         1.25  ->  1.28    pgpkeys/chapter.sgml
policies.sgml        1.16  ->  1.18    policies/chapter.sgml
porting.sgml         1.93  ->  1.112   contrib/chapter.sgml
ports.sgml           1.29  ->  1.31    ports/chapter.sgml
printing.sgml        1.21  ->  1.22    printing/chapter.sgml
relnotes.sgml        1.24  ->  1.28    introduction/chapter.sgml  [1]
submitters.sgml      1.161 ->  1.246   contrib/chapter.sgml
synching.sgml        1.12  ->  1.13    cutting-edge/chapter.sgml
userppp.sgml         1.28  ->  1.30    ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml

[1] A chunk of relnotes.sgml is in an IGNORED marked section. Why?

Submitted by:	A bunch (~ 50%) of merging done by Charles A. Wimmer
                (cawimm@FreeBSD.ORG), rest by Nik.
1998-11-12 01:26:39 +00:00
Nik Clayton
6ff34ef882 Replace
<xref linkend="target" remap="foo">

with

    <link linkend="target">foo</link>

Internal links within the Handbook now do the right thing.
1998-11-05 23:28:48 +00:00
Nik Clayton
336215d4e6 Added chapter.decl, which contains a declaration for a DocBook chapter.
Added

<!--
     Local Variables:
     mode: sgml
     sgml-declaration: "../chapter.decl"
     sgml-indent-data: t
     sgml-omittag: nil
     sgml-shorttag: nil
     sgml-always-quote-attributes: t
     sgml-minimize-attributes: max
     sgml-parent-document: ("../handbook.sgml" "part" "chapter")
     End:
-->

to the bottom of each chapter.sgml file so that Emacs can do the right
thing.
1998-11-03 23:28:30 +00:00
Nik Clayton
2207769022 Split the handbook into individual files. Each chapter is in a file called
chapter.sgml in a directory named according to the value the id
attribute on that chapter.

Added chapters.ent, which lists the entities for each chapter.

Updated handbook.sgml to use these entities.
1998-11-03 23:17:06 +00:00