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Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Jim Mock
40274f387b Change "manpage" and "man page" to "manual pages". 2001-08-11 21:34:53 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
a801119d91 Fix typo: s/bought/brought/
PR:		docs/29605
Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk>
2001-08-10 16:18:59 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Chern Lee
c20dd61362 Spelling Changes:
* OSs -> Operating Systems
* commmunications -> communications
* realise -> realize
* customising -> customizing
* customise -> customize
* realise -> realize
* behaviour -> behavior

British to American spelling for some of the above words only in the
Handbook as discussed on -doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 21:25:28 +00:00
Jim Mock
99a71ecd7b More grammatical and typo fixes. While I'm here, add a few notes to
various parts to make things more clear to the reader.

Submitted by:	John Murphy <jfm@blueyonder.co.uk> on -doc
2001-08-05 19:25:16 +00:00
Nik Clayton
c3f5ae8e0b Revamp the synopsis, and flesh out the "Why build a custom kernel?" section. 2001-08-02 00:47:33 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fdac55c46 * Combine singular/plural index terms.
* Add a few section id's so that the printed index can find the page
  number.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-07-30 17:18:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
919197254e Make <indexterm> entries more specific by using <command> and
<filename> tags.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-20 21:44:45 +00:00
Chern Lee
3e8d98b70a Standardize:
TCL -> Tcl
ethernet -> Ethernet
ftp (noun) -> FTP

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 22:20:51 +00:00
Chern Lee
7001f29865 Standardize:
UNIX -> Unix
UNIX's -> Unixes (one instance)

Unix is a proper noun, not an acronym.  Also conforms to O'Reilly's word list.

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 00:11:24 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
fef76d5c8e Match tenses in a sentence.
PR:		28896
Submitted by:	shill@free.fr
2001-07-12 00:41:05 +00:00
Jens Schweikhardt
e097e09cb4 Fixed word doubling typo. 2001-07-08 15:40:29 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4e521b8bb2 Makefile's to make it easy to build individual handbook chapters. These
are *not* recursed in to by the top level Makefile.
2001-06-30 14:55:40 +00:00
Nik Clayton
a3ff4a598a Fix typo. 2001-06-28 18:37:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
a44322ee3f Apply the magic pixie dust of understanding to the "make the kernel" build
process (and the choice of procedure).
2001-06-28 14:49:04 +00:00
Murray Stokely
e6917a777e Properly wrap indexterm entries that exceed 80 characters. Also move
<indexterm> tags outside of <para>s since this can add extra
whitespace characters to the output (for print stylesheets).

Pointed out by: Chris Costello
2001-06-26 20:10:25 +00:00
Murray Stokely
acd83cd066 Add 26 index entries
Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-06-26 17:46:16 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
30a6814226 Remove duplicate word.
PR:		28356
Submitted by:	Tyler Spivey <tspivey8@home.com>
2001-06-23 05:20:27 +00:00
Murray Stokely
88f3235bb0 Spelling corrections :
transalates    -> translates
  indictes       -> indicates
  ficticious     -> fictitious
  sandox         -> sandbox
  priveleged     -> privileged
  unix           -> Unix
  versatily      -> (sentence reworded)
  inerface       -> interface
  internet       -> Internet
  appriate       -> appropriate
  Logictech      -> Logitech
  extetions      -> extensions
  occuring       -> ocurring
  keypair        -> key pair
  tunnelled      -> tunneled
  inializes      -> initializes
  ommitted       -> omitted
  seperate       -> separate
  unintelligable -> unintelligible
  signalling     -> signaling
  appearence     -> appearance
  descision      -> decision

Pointed out by: ispell(1)
2001-06-21 17:21:01 +00:00
Chris Costello
c3a5e57674 NCPU, NAPIC, NBUS and NINTR are no longer applicable in RELENG_4.
Remove the bit that quotes these as part of the kernel configuration.

PR:		25450
2001-06-06 20:39:25 +00:00
Jim Mock
057be43195 Remove ATA_ENABLE_ATAPI_DMA and it's description since it's no longer in
GENERIC.

PR:		26838
Submitted by:	Ilya Martynov <m_ilya@agava.com>
2001-04-25 15:22:44 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
a0415e82f0 Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).  Stuff inside
<question> tags in the mini-faq's and clearly-attributed blocks was
left alone.
2001-04-17 01:37:48 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
caa6994914 DocBook police: open and close tags for <programlisting> should cuddle
up to the contents within.

Approved by:	nik
2001-04-09 00:33:58 +00:00
Peter Wemm
985b9b2cfc Switch KERNEL= and KERNCONF= around in the examples. Tell people that
older releases use KERNEL= only.  Wordsmith repairs welcome.
2001-02-13 21:28:14 +00:00
Ben Smithurst
f62b948a50 Document the KERNEL -> KERNCONF change for buildkernel in -CURRENT. 2001-01-24 12:22:38 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
c2af9f22eb Add missing close bracket (I don't know this is correct place where author
wants).
2000-08-10 02:09:18 +00:00
Jun Kuriyama
4915911504 Add missing ')'. 2000-08-07 05:59:26 +00:00
Mark Ovens
1477223911 Minor grammar change 2000-08-05 16:43:55 +00:00
Mark Ovens
3b433f7cdb Fix minor typo. 2000-08-05 16:31:35 +00:00
Jim Mock
337c466f64 4.0-STABLE -> 4-STABLE
Submitted by:	Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
2000-07-26 18:09:11 +00:00
Jim Mock
115a84d651 Let it be known that it is not always necessary to build world before
building a kernel.

PR:		20191
Submitted by:	Dan Langille <dan@freebsddiary.org>
Expanded on by:	Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
2000-07-26 17:38:14 +00:00
Alexander Langer
e22a8d4ce6 For the new buildkernel/installkernel targets, /usr/src/* must exist.
release-versions of FreeBSD might only contain /usr/src/sys.
The old description lead to misunderstandings for newbies.
Clarify that you still have to use the old method if you don't sync src/
with the FreeBSD project.

PR:		20136
Reported by:	Stephen Montgomery-Smith <stephen@math.missouri.edu>
		(different patch suggested)
2000-07-25 09:34:10 +00:00
Alexander Langer
85e8182fd5 For 3.x -> 4.x upgrading and 4.x or later kernel builds, mention the
buildkernel/installkernel targets.

Add a note about /usr/src/UPDATING also in this section, since it also
affects kernels and the other entry in the ``make world'' part can be
overlooked if one is only looking for kernel help.
2000-07-15 09:38:36 +00:00
Jim Mock
370586999f Attack of the spelling police, part II. 2000-06-14 00:47:37 +00:00
Murray Stokely
d941b9bbb8 Reviewed by: jkh
Replaced one innaccuracy (ethernet -> TCP/IP) and one missing space typo.
2000-06-12 23:57:35 +00:00
Jim Mock
3302fdee27 Change &ldquo;...&rdquo; to <quote>...</quote> as per a discussion on
-doc.

Suggested by:	nik
2000-06-08 01:56:23 +00:00
Jim Mock
4f2ca0351d Bring this chapter into the real world. The configuration file is now
relevant to 4.0 as with the other bits.
2000-04-06 00:07:13 +00:00
Nik Clayton
6db1b0523b Remove the "pseudo-device log" entry, it's not been valid since
LINT:1.376.
2000-03-07 13:26:44 +00:00
Jim Mock
7857addaf5 Various typo, spelling, and grammatical corrections.
Submitted by:	Greg Sutter <gsutter@cdrom.com>
2000-01-21 20:42:28 +00:00
Chris Costello
7cfb0ff20b Rid blank lines of whitespace.
(Translation teams:  You can ignore this commit.)
1999-11-07 01:54:56 +00:00
Nik Clayton
b5d23f815c [From PR]
* Removed obsolete BOUNCE_BUFFERS reference
* Added eisa0 reference to basic controllers
* Changed wcd0 references to acd0
* Added ch0 and pass0 devices to SCSI device support
* Changed obsolete lpt0 reference to ppbus/ppc/lpt
* Added pcm to sound devices that do not require snd0

PR:             docs/13946
Submitted by:   Chris D. Faulhaber <jedgar@fxp.org>
1999-11-01 19:16:06 +00:00
Peter Wemm
5ff728b8ca $Id$ -> $FreeBSD$ 1999-09-06 06:53:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
122d319794 "../handbook.sgml" -> "../book.sgml" in Emacs local variables section. 1999-08-23 21:24:10 +00:00
Nik Clayton
f18b900b84 Fix many typos. Much kudos to the submitter for this effort.
PR:             docs/12956
Submitted by:   Neil Blakey-Milner <nbm@rucus.ru.ac.za>
1999-08-05 20:48:25 +00:00
Nik Clayton
642b4850ee o Correct some markup (<literal> -> <filename>)
o st0 -> sa0

o Document when and where you should quote numbers in the config file.

I've modified Chris' patch slightly, any errors are mine.

PR:             docs/12181
Submitted by:   Chris Costello <chris@calldei.com>
1999-07-27 18:20:11 +00:00
Doug White
5e14d4b717 Obliterate references to the nonfunctional SBC_* kernel options. Also
repoint sound documentation reference to the directory and not the pre-pcm
era file.  Readme.cards is particuarly useful for the pcm driver.

Suggested by: "Cambria, Mike" <mcambria@lucent.com>
1999-05-28 00:31:25 +00:00
Nik Clayton
25dbcfcde2 iUpdated to reflect changes to kernel config on the 3.x branch, new
devices, and so on and so forth.

PR:		docs/11182
Submitted by:	Chris Costello <chris@holly.dyndns.org>
1999-05-16 13:29:08 +00:00
Nik Clayton
10b0b0a21e Add SGML comments at the top of the files with the $Id$ string. Remove
most of the other spurious comments.

Two comments relating to copyright have *not* been merged in from the
LinuxDoc version yet -- I've contacted the original authors to ask if
they would be willing to assign the copyright to the project. When I
get their response the copyright comments will either be merged in, or
left out, as necessary.
1999-03-08 22:04:49 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1e28ab5a96 Huge whitespace changes. Translators can ignore this commit completely.
Rationale: All the changes to the DocBook handbook so far have been
careful to keep whitespace changes to a minimum. This is so the
translators have as easy a job as possible in identifying exactly what's
changed.

This has meant the English version has become more and more 'ugly'. Lines
indented by the wrong amount, some lines longer than 130 characters,
others shorter than 20, gaps of 3 or 4 lines between paragraphs (and
sometimes within paragraphs). This makes it difficult to follow the
structure of the document, and needlessly complicates fixing SGML
problems.

It also makes the source practically useless as a teaching aid; the
more baroque the source looks, the less likely people are to dive in and
contribute.

This commit fixes all that -- and boy was it tedious. The snag is, it's
touched almost every line in every file in the Handbook.

Technically, the changes were made by running (in Emacs)
sgml-indent-or-tab (bound to the TAB key) on almost each line (except
those in <programlisting>, <screen>, <literallayout>, and other
verbatim sections), and then running sgml-fill-element (bound to
C-c C-q) on most paragraphs.

FWIW, this is the first, only, and last change of this type contemplated.
1999-03-07 21:26:43 +00:00