- Add missing option, literal tags
- Use of programlisting tags instead of <para><option></option></para>
which is ugly and wrap lines when the browser size is not "correct"
- s/--/—
- Tag and capitalize properly hostnames
- Remove useless tags
- A little rewording for consistency.
an unnecessary colon.
o If X is the chief weakness of something, then it actually is the most
important one. Remove some confusing text from a sentence.
- Use trademark entities.
- Add trademark attributions.
- Always use correct case for trademarks.
- Don't join trademarks with other words, e.g. using hyphens.
- Don't use trademarks as nouns (e.g. don't use "Windows NT's").
diskless-x/article.sgml:
- While I'm here anyway add trademark tags for all trademarks, now
that the stylesheet handles it right.
trademark.ent:
- Add entities for more trademarks / companies.
Also rename the 3Com trademark entity from t3com to tm.3com. This
should make the entity naming convention a bit more consitent. This is
done now since the entity is not used too many places yet.
o Consistently use hostid elements when referring to domain names
o Reword the explanation of the root zone [1]
PR: docs/41449 [1]
Submitted by: Eric Anderson <anderson@centtech.com> [1]
used inside of a <para>. Previously, that was done here, which was
fine until I accidentally wrapped the paragraph which messes up the
formatting since <programlistings> are sensisitve to \n. This change
separates out the <programlisting> from the <para>, as is done
elsewhere in the handbook. Thanks to Tom Hukins for spotting my error
in accidentally wrapping the <programlisting>.
2) A couple of grammatical nits.
3) Completely remove the outdated section on libscrypt and libdescrypt,
and replace with an outline of login.conf, the passwd_format capability
and auth.conf, along with an outline of why this is an issue with NIS.
#3 provoked by: Mike Hogsett <hogsett@csl.sri.com> on -questions
- capitalize IP and FORTRAN,
- move entries in singular to the corresponding plural entries,
- fix AT&T index entry,
- move composite entries into the primary index entry and
add a secondary entry when necessary,
- move indexterm elements in the proper section.
o Rename the "Wireless background" section to "Wireless Modes of Operation".
o Mention specifically that we do not cover IBSS mode here.
o One tiny grammatical fix.
linked copy of named-xfer. Also add details on cleaning the source
tree after the build to avoid leaving stale objects/binaries around.
Prompted by: jeev@boldinternet.net
Several index terms were too long and this prevented the index from
being displayed in the normal two column style in print output.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
fact, the company has sought out FreeBSD vendors in the past looking
for royalty money).
We still need to update the Handbook and many manpages to provide
recommendations for situations in which routed is inadequate. All I
have done is fix the broken link.
PR: docs/51407
