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Author SHA1 Message Date
Murray Stokely
d6b6e478fb Add <command> tag.
PR:		31886
Submitted by:	Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
2001-11-14 15:45:47 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
9a59b793ed Mention the risks of umount -f.
PR:		31883
Submitted by:	Michael Lucas <mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org>
2001-11-13 03:32:27 +00:00
Bruce A. Mah
7a04c68be7 Update shells description.
While I'm here delete some not-quite-as-applicable-as-it-once-was
text about shells in ports having "much more power".

PR:		31884
Submitted by:	mwlucas@blackhelicopters.org
2001-11-10 19:56:58 +00:00
Tom Hukins
c462aeab22 Improve use of English
Submitted by:	Jostein Trondal <jostein.trondal@sikkerhet.no>
2001-10-26 08:07:59 +00:00
Chern Lee
dd01434120 Fix prepositional phrases in Sypnosis:
* After reading this chapter you will know:
   -> After reading this chapter, you will know:
 * Before reading this chapter you should:
   -> Before reading this chapter, you should:
2001-10-08 20:30:51 +00:00
Murray Stokely
950b084ea1 Correct the description of /etc/mail.
PR:		docs/30931
Submitted by:	Martin Heinen <mheinen0@wiesbaden-online.de>
2001-10-02 06:09:56 +00:00
Chern Lee
a4aab17018 Add short section about devices and device nodes.
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-09-20 21:48:49 +00:00
Chern Lee
6cfc9d250f Move section on mounting and unmounting filesystems from
Storage chapter to Basics.

Suggested by: nik and murray
2001-09-13 00:05:59 +00:00
Murray Stokely
55c4e2da8f * Rewrite the 'Directory Structure' section, and include descriptions
of a small subset of the directories listed in hier(7) that a newbie
  should really be familiar with.  Continue to point the user to
  hier(7) for an exaustive description of the directory hierarchy.
* Fix a couple of typos
* Enclose commands in <command> tags.

Partially Submitted by:	logo
2001-09-08 00:12:38 +00:00
Valentino Vaschetto
4623c525db CTRL -> <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
SPACE -> <keycap>Space</keycap>
ALT -> <keycap>Alt</keycap>
ENTER -> <keycap>Enter</keycap>
and so on...

Reviewed by:	chern
2001-08-30 22:44:37 +00:00
Nik Clayton
ffebacfa76 Update the conceptual disk model figure. 2001-08-30 16:54:13 +00:00
Murray Stokely
3719fb1927 Add a standard synopsis. 2001-08-22 07:16:36 +00:00
Murray Stokely
141a46306d Fix typo to form a complete sentence. 2001-08-21 23:42:50 +00:00
Nik Clayton
9b3c17ae99 EPS file (and it's Kontour original) that diagrams the relationship between
a disk, its slices, and its partitions.
2001-08-21 23:35:53 +00:00
Chern Lee
6c21f4c1e9 Change all contractions to proper form.
don't -> do not
isn't -> is not
let's -> let us
... and so on
2001-08-16 18:35:08 +00:00
Jim Mock
40274f387b Change "manpage" and "man page" to "manual pages". 2001-08-11 21:34:53 +00:00
Jim Mock
7c6fc33233 ##MB -> ## MB
webserver -> web server
2001-08-11 20:39:17 +00:00
Chern Lee
205cf1b49a Standardize capitalization of titles:
* First and last word uppercase
* Prepositions, articles, and short conjunctions lowercase
* The word 'to' lowercase
* Preserved capitalization for program/command names

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-10 22:58:17 +00:00
Chern Lee
2b61014302 Properly markup contributions in <chapterinfo>/<sect1info>/<sect2info> tags
according to recent changes for entire Handbook.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-09 23:42:35 +00:00
Chern Lee
c20dd61362 Spelling Changes:
* OSs -> Operating Systems
* commmunications -> communications
* realise -> realize
* customising -> customizing
* customise -> customize
* realise -> realize
* behaviour -> behavior

British to American spelling for some of the above words only in the
Handbook as discussed on -doc.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-08-06 21:25:28 +00:00
Jim Mock
f1d9605e83 Change the remaining instances of e-mail to email. 2001-08-04 20:06:22 +00:00
Nik Clayton
7231511d66 Add text talking about processes, daemons, and how to send them signals. 2001-07-30 23:44:00 +00:00
Murray Stokely
2fdac55c46 * Combine singular/plural index terms.
* Add a few section id's so that the printed index can find the page
  number.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-07-30 17:18:54 +00:00
Chern Lee
91f3c93359 Standardize:
FreeBSD ports collection -> FreeBSD Ports Collection
Ports collection -> ports collection

These changes look the most appropriate and appear in the handbook
this way.

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-25 20:41:28 +00:00
Chern Lee
a5c8708c40 Markup Fixes:
Placed sh, bash, csh, tcsh in <command>
  Placed commands in <command>
  Placed options in <option>
  Placed several commands in man entities
  Placed several applications in <application>
  Placed make vars/targets into <makevar>/<maketarget>
  Placed filenames in <filename>
  <literal>chmod()</literal> -> <function>chmod()</function>

Standardize:
  ATT -> AT&amp;T
  endeavour -> endeavor
  tcl -> Tcl

Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 23:18:09 +00:00
Chern Lee
4df284c246 Made <indexterm>'s more specific by adding <filename>, <command>,
and <application> entities.

Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
Reviewed by:	murray
2001-07-19 01:11:52 +00:00
Murray Stokely
20ac95335e Enclose contributor names in <chapterinfo> tags.
Properly markup command names.
2001-07-17 02:31:55 +00:00
Chern Lee
7001f29865 Standardize:
UNIX -> Unix
UNIX's -> Unixes (one instance)

Unix is a proper noun, not an acronym.  Also conforms to O'Reilly's word list.

Approved by:	murray
2001-07-17 00:11:24 +00:00
Chern Lee
07ea524120 Added Chris Shumway to contributers section and added author entity 2001-07-13 21:22:49 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
ccd8ab61d5 Modes on a filesystem are stored as two octets (a u_int16_t), not one.
PR:		28896
Submitted by:	shill@free.fr
2001-07-12 00:45:22 +00:00
Nik Clayton
4e521b8bb2 Makefile's to make it easy to build individual handbook chapters. These
are *not* recursed in to by the top level Makefile.
2001-06-30 14:55:40 +00:00
Murray Stokely
60cc02d17a Add 21 new indexterms
Submitted by:	Valentino Vaschetto <valentino.vaschetto@windriver.com>
2001-06-29 18:13:38 +00:00
Dima Dorfman
a0415e82f0 Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?).  Stuff inside
<question> tags in the mini-faq's and clearly-attributed blocks was
left alone.
2001-04-17 01:37:48 +00:00
Jim Mock
6b86823ee6 Fix some spelling errors and some other minor nits. 2000-12-15 21:52:35 +00:00
Chris Costello
8f61bed60b Properly capitalize section <title> tags. 2000-08-20 17:18:43 +00:00
Mark Ovens
88e4f74c98 Fix the mark-up for screen examples in the Unix Basics section 2000-08-08 23:23:06 +00:00
Jim Mock
3302fdee27 Change &ldquo;...&rdquo; to <quote>...</quote> as per a discussion on
-doc.

Suggested by:	nik
2000-06-08 01:56:23 +00:00
Murray Stokely
29547d7851 typo : marcos->macros
Approved by:	jkh
2000-05-19 07:35:46 +00:00
Jim Mock
7977f86130 Fix up a few things in the Changing Shells section.
PR:	18178
Submitted by:	Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
2000-04-25 18:31:11 +00:00
Jim Mock
cc328eda1d Add an entry on changing shells.
PR:		17862
Suggested by:	Mike Kohout <mwkohout@hotmail.com>
Submitted by:	Eric Ogren <eogren@earthlink.net>
2000-04-10 19:17:16 +00:00
Jim Mock
2b4d281a37 Fix some miscellaneous typos.
Submitted by:	lss <lss@2ez.com>
2000-04-06 20:28:35 +00:00
Jim Mock
7670054330 Spell Chris' last name correctly. 2000-03-15 23:01:40 +00:00
Jim Mock
d1c588f513 Add some content to this chapter of the handbook, and restructure it.
Submitted by:	Chris Shumway <cshumway@cdrom.com>
2000-03-15 23:00:40 +00:00
Jim Mock
4f304ad661 o Fix a typo (view -> viewed)
o Make a minor grammatical change (even have -> have)

PR:		16288
Submitted by:	Bob Johnson <bobj@atlantic.net>
2000-01-24 20:54:53 +00:00
Chris Costello
7cfb0ff20b Rid blank lines of whitespace.
(Translation teams:  You can ignore this commit.)
1999-11-07 01:54:56 +00:00
Peter Wemm
5ff728b8ca $Id$ -> $FreeBSD$ 1999-09-06 06:53:43 +00:00
Nik Clayton
122d319794 "../handbook.sgml" -> "../book.sgml" in Emacs local variables section. 1999-08-23 21:24:10 +00:00
Nik Clayton
04cc96e86d Add a note about section 9 of the manual pages, Kernel Developers. 1999-04-08 21:30:16 +00:00
Nik Clayton
10b0b0a21e Add SGML comments at the top of the files with the $Id$ string. Remove
most of the other spurious comments.

Two comments relating to copyright have *not* been merged in from the
LinuxDoc version yet -- I've contacted the original authors to ask if
they would be willing to assign the copyright to the project. When I
get their response the copyright comments will either be merged in, or
left out, as necessary.
1999-03-08 22:04:49 +00:00
Nik Clayton
1e28ab5a96 Huge whitespace changes. Translators can ignore this commit completely.
Rationale: All the changes to the DocBook handbook so far have been
careful to keep whitespace changes to a minimum. This is so the
translators have as easy a job as possible in identifying exactly what's
changed.

This has meant the English version has become more and more 'ugly'. Lines
indented by the wrong amount, some lines longer than 130 characters,
others shorter than 20, gaps of 3 or 4 lines between paragraphs (and
sometimes within paragraphs). This makes it difficult to follow the
structure of the document, and needlessly complicates fixing SGML
problems.

It also makes the source practically useless as a teaching aid; the
more baroque the source looks, the less likely people are to dive in and
contribute.

This commit fixes all that -- and boy was it tedious. The snag is, it's
touched almost every line in every file in the Handbook.

Technically, the changes were made by running (in Emacs)
sgml-indent-or-tab (bound to the TAB key) on almost each line (except
those in <programlisting>, <screen>, <literallayout>, and other
verbatim sections), and then running sgml-fill-element (bound to
C-c C-q) on most paragraphs.

FWIW, this is the first, only, and last change of this type contemplated.
1999-03-07 21:26:43 +00:00